All Comments on 'Slut Next Door'

This was a poorly written piece with many typos. The rape "fantasy" seems immature and cartoonish and indulges the worst stereotypes since the characters are portrayed as ignorant and unsympathetic.

mmmmmmmmmmm i loved it wish my neighbor would fuck me like that

horrible writing style combined with a lack of plot. Yawn!

go back to school your writing is terrible.

To the insensitive bastard who wrote your previous comment,why dont you submit a story yoursself!

Your punctuation skills are lacking, smart ass.

That was hot

Please use correct punctuation. That would've made this story much better

Your story was concise and arousing. Wished you lived next door