I liked it. I wish that you had gone a little further with the story before leaving me hanging, but....I guess that's just as much a testament to good writing as anything else. Thank you. ~Paul
very pleasant. Thank you, sir for a nice story. That's my perception of it. I could see the people and their actions. You write good pictures.
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I enjoyed it
I liked it. I wish that you had gone a little further with the story before leaving me hanging, but....I guess that's just as much a testament to good writing as anything else. Thank you.
~Paul
I liked it very much, smooth, soft and--
very pleasant. Thank you, sir for a nice story. That's my perception of it. I could see the people and their actions. You write good pictures.
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