All Comments on 'Foursome Coach'

Excellent writing. I never thought of a coach, but I can see that it would reduce the fumbling and uncertainty of what to do next, and would enhance the experience by going slowly step by step. I hope you write about what happens next.

Please--chapter 2!

The description of the event was good and very erotic but I would have preferred a little more build up ( some discussion between the couples about swinging or not ). It would have been nice to also have continued to where they left the ship.

What left me wondering was, if they were keen to swap anyway, why did they need a coach to help them do it. Maybe a little more scene setting could have explained/justified that.

Still not a bad mini story and I enjoyed what there was of it.

excellent,,liked it,,great idea,,a swing coach!!