How can you be so cruel to stop right there? please put up the rest of the story.
Quite an intriguing story. Great buildup to the first step. Please use your spell check. wear should be where. It detracts from the story. I'm looking for the sequences.
Damn,great start to the story. made me hard and wanting to try it too. please please put up rest of the story.. A+++ effort so far........
I'm working on it. Keep checking back
Loved the start, just hated where it ended!! Finish it, Please!!
This story should have a pt. 2. Keep up the good work!
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can't wait for chapter 2
How can you be so cruel to stop right there?
please put up the rest of the story.
Intersting dialog
Quite an intriguing story.
Great buildup to the first step.
Please use your spell check. wear should be where.
It detracts from the story.
I'm looking for the sequences.
grrrrrrrrrr,
Damn,great start to the story. made me hard and wanting to try it too. please please put up rest of the story..
A+++ effort so far........
Thanks for the support
I'm working on it. Keep checking back
Great Start
Loved the start, just hated where it ended!! Finish it, Please!!
More, PLEASE!
This story should have a pt. 2. Keep up the good work!
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