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My Aunt Is Very Sexy

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by motherfucker7401/02/10

Was more like an unfinished first draft

It seems like you rushed to type it and post it. Take your time, don't rush the story, build up is key, and never ever post a story where you leave the reader hanging. We do fall out of the horniness after it's just been a few minutes since we read it.

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by Lelouch10/02/12

It seems like part of this story is missing... the first line describes his aunt as his lover, yet ends without them having actually made love yet. Are there later pages?

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by Anonymous10/13/12

Great !

Please continue, really like the idea and there's so much potential. Well done.

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