All Comments on 'Remodeling Carla Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
gets unpleasant

thanks and end of story

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 14 years ago
very nice tale...

...even though both her and hubbie are cheaters...the scenes are nicely written, the two main characters endearing. It would behoove you to get an editor to correct a few, not many, errors. Keep it up; I'm looking forwrd to the conclusion (hubbie etc...) LeFrog08

crow76308crow76308over 12 years ago
Similar to Your Other Story

But that's okay. I hope to read, more. Excellent work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What happened to Frank?

I read this series after finding Everybody Needs a Hobby, and initially thought that it was going to be a rehash of an earlier story given the initial introduction of the camera. I happy to say that I was wrong, and you have crafted 2 (IMHO) stories that I enjoyed. A good story should stand up without the sex. The sex just makes it interesting. ;-)

But what happed to Frank? Is he still in Fiji 2 years on?? There is a lot more in this tale that needs to be told. Does Frank come home to find George buried in Carla's ass, shoots him, goes to jail leaving Carla and Kristen??

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Needs an ending

Your story needs an ending to resolve the marriage between Carla and Frank.

GeorgeDaBuilderGeorgeDaBuilderover 12 years agoAuthor
The end is in sight

I was interrupted by life while doing the story on Carla. Enough time had passed that I thought it was okay to drop it and move on to another story. Enough of you good people have written asking that I continue or bring it to a conclusion, so that will be what I attempt to do. Thanks for your interest.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please continue the story

I read this story because I enjoyed "Hobby" so much. I see from you last update that it has been awhile. I also read you comment about life sometimes gets in the way of.........stuff. Please finish the Story, I really enjoy your writing. Oh Yeah... don't stop with "Hobbies" either. I guess I'm greedy...

Thanks Again for a couple of well written, thought out pieces..

FyreHeartFyreHeartalmost 12 years ago
needs resolution

Too well written not to have a proper conclusion. looking forward to reading more.

reader661reader661over 11 years ago
Great story

I do hope this is not the end.Well written and watching for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please keep going

Hi im really enjoying the sexual awakening of carla and her george. This is almost as good as "Hobby", i cant wait for the next installment.

ManofMithgarManofMithgarover 10 years ago
Remodeling

Wow, loved this series but you stopped! I hope you are planning to come back to this soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Closure

Please. It is a really good story. Give us some closure at least.

smc331smc331over 10 years ago
Please do return to this story...

It's well worth continuing! Thank you!

myassisdraginmyassisdraginabout 10 years ago
Dam......

When can we expect to see chapters 9, 10 and more??????

Please start writing more as there is sill a heck of a lot that can be written on thi storry.....

Myassisdragin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
And then...?

Where is the continuation? Too good to stop now!

ag2507ag2507almost 10 years ago
Time to continue

Pretty please

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more please

you need to continue this now.the wait has been to long

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
desolation

that this has been abandoned...I was soooo looking forward to the completion. Ah well, thanks for what you did do as it gave me much pleasure.

DM

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 9 years ago
Wow! ... then Damn!

I know that "George" is getting all he can handle (and more) in his Hobby days; however I have to echo the other reviewers in our disappointment that you left this version of one of my all time favorite leading men (and women!) without a 'happy ending' ;-)

In any case this will go into my Favorites folder, along with 'Hobby', with my thanks.

Jason

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
please

we need more on this

flarebel2327flarebel2327over 8 years ago
ending ??????????????

i sure hope you aren't going to leave it like this. bummer !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

David781David781over 8 years ago

I hope you have plans to continue this story.

lightlytoastedlightlytoastedabout 8 years ago

You really need to let this continue to a conclusion

flarebel2327flarebel2327over 5 years ago
finish

hasn't written anything since 7/30/15

Silverbullet141Silverbullet141about 3 years ago
How is this the end of the story?

Where is the ending???

Anonymous
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