All Comments on 'Telemarketing'

by rjordan

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panpipespanpipesabout 14 years ago
Brilliant

I haven't laughed that hard in a while. It might have been fun to take it further, but then again, some things are best left to the imagination. With good actors, it could be a great audio story.

angiquesophieangiquesophieabout 14 years ago
just lovely

nice idea, very well executed. loved it.

AzPilotAzPilotabout 14 years ago
A chuckle a sentence- thanks a lot.

I can't wait to try it- oops, my phone's ringing now- bye.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Very good

Hee! Boy meets girl, boy gets horny, boy loses girl, boy changes his phone number. Excellent! Perfect length.

travelgaltravelgalabout 14 years ago
Very original

I really enjoyed this short, yet hilarious story! A very good idea, that comes across well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
great flash

5!

Dual_TriodeDual_Triodeabout 14 years ago
Well Done

Very enjoyable. I love how the encounter progresses, and how the table turns. Great job!

ktmccollktmccollabout 14 years ago
Short and sweet...

...and very funny. Nicely done!

blushingjenblushingjenalmost 14 years ago
Dangit

Way better than my idea for a similar story. Shoot. :)

brujaybrujayalmost 13 years ago
Hysterical!

Love it. Thank you for the chuckle.

MaddieKimMaddieKimabout 12 years ago
Funny

As Marvin said, 'Supercute!'

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassalmost 9 years ago
Why didn't I think of that?

Very original way to get back at the telemarketers. I'll have to try it the next time I get a call--but then I get a lot of calls from Indian males trying to 'fix' my computer. I don't really care what color of underwear they have on.

DreamCloudDreamCloudover 8 years ago
Cute

A short read I thoroughly enjoyed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
good idea

This made me laugh out loud. I will use this method of handling telemarketing calls from now on! :)

Polly_DollyPolly_Dolly12 months ago

Now why didn’t I think of that.? Very humorous dialogue development, and more than a grain of truth about human interaction.

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