All Comments on 'Kate's Train Trip'

by DaveEnglish

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 14 years ago
Hot story

I thought it was erotic that he could see the cum running down her leg. She must have really liked it or she wouldn't kissed him after. Good read, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good Story

Utter fantasy but fun. I never worry about fictional characters getting STDs.

pretzel60609pretzel60609about 14 years ago
Good Story

Utter fantasy but fun. I never worry about fictional characters getting STDs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
editing

Could use some editing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent read

Loved this story. I would like a bit more info about Kate and her partner (their ages, how long they've been together etc) but I found it very erotic.

The fact that STDs and unwanted pregnancies don't crop up in sexual fantasies does not bother or surprise me one little bit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sex On a Train

Really enjoyed it. it was well enough written that the suspention of disbelief didn't bother me. Don't listen to the haters. They show up for every "Loving Wives" story.

NautonnierNautonnierabout 14 years ago
Good Story

It never ceases to amaze me the number of people who read the stories here and assume that they are accounts of reality.

It was well written although short - and of course the business card leaves a hook for another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
SHORT BUT SWEET

Wife and I both loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More please

Pleassse... I have never been so wet. Something similar happened to me but on a bus.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Excellent, encore!

PamR55PamR55about 10 years ago
Excellent

Mr. English, you have spun a erotic tale which I wish had happened to me. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Woman up/down Steps on a Train, Visiting Museums & Walking About in 4" Heels?

The author's bio states he is straight and attached. I find it difficult to believe that, if he expects us to believe a woman would knowingly and willingly embark on a trip like this in those heels!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love this story: ❤ = ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5.0=100%)! The story is short but sweet! It is erotic, romantic, & realistic, all in one.

KATE is a KEEPER. Period.

In my book this story is a MUST READ.

Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT!):

"Kate let go of the overhead strap and grabbed hold of the seat she stood next to bending over giving the man better access to her pussy, while looking straight at me."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This story has a solid fan base; as of

June 22 2021 it has got 82 faves and

139.4k views, which is 0.59 faves per

1k views, an excellent faves-to-views

ratio!

Personally I love this story, and gave it a

5+ (❤💚❤💚❤+)!

Dear DaveEnglish:

Thank you for posting this outstanding story ❤.

To quote PamR55 (7 years ago):

"you have spun an erotic tale which I wish had happened to me."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Bravissimo! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5.0).

LIDiverLIDiverover 1 year ago

Deliciously naughty. Tory told me to put it in our “read again folder”.

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