I enjoy it a lot, please write another chapter much longer than that one.
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Anonymous01/04/10
rethink some of your
The author needs to seriously rethink some of the terms and sentence structure. Forget the crap cell phone test message stuff as many don't know or understand it; and besides there is ample space to fully type out the words.
I thought it was just an outstanding little incest tale. I hope you write many more.
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Anonymous02/01/10
VERY HOT
THIS STORY IS VERY HOT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Anonymous07/01/10
I like your stories.
Keep on writing!
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Anonymous01/21/11
Where can I find this kind of clinic?
I found this to be very intriguing and have to know where I can find a place like in this story.
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Anonymous07/27/11
Weak concept about the clinic
This one was very rushed and the clinic was a total ass-pull. Also, how come sis was so familiar with how his scar would look?
You needed to build the story a bit first so it's not just any two horny young people screwing in a backseat after their accidental BJ hookup. Best leave this one as an insane idea that doesn't quite work. Keep posting though. Thanks
English
Wicked!
In every sense of the word.
Nice nice
I enjoy it a lot, please write another chapter much longer than that one.
rethink some of your
The author needs to seriously rethink some of the terms and sentence structure. Forget the crap cell phone test message stuff as many don't know or understand it; and besides there is ample space to fully type out the words.
Hot Hot Hot!!!
Really liked your story. I hope you continue.
I ENJOYED IT THOROUGHLY!
I thought it was just an outstanding little incest tale. I hope you write many more.
VERY HOT
THIS STORY IS VERY HOT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
I like your stories.
Keep on writing!
Where can I find this kind of clinic?
I found this to be very intriguing and have to know where I can find a place like in this story.
Weak concept about the clinic
This one was very rushed and the clinic was a total ass-pull. Also, how come sis was so familiar with how his scar would look?
You needed to build the story a bit first so it's not just any two horny young people screwing in a backseat after their accidental BJ hookup. Best leave this one as an insane idea that doesn't quite work. Keep posting though. Thanks
Weird
A good setting but a bit rushed and how would the sister know he has a scar on his dick in the first place >.>
Brilliant!
Would definitely love to see more chapters of this story!
To VictorDoUrden
Because he fell and hit his dick on the table in front of his family. I'm sure after that, they all knew he'd had to get stitches.
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