All Comments on 'Lake'

I would like to see a continuation of this-what comes out in time. With your imagination, I bet it could be equally good.

Not a bad start. Needs to be a bit more in depth. Perhaps a 2nd chapter?

Interesting being raped by some unusual "lake stalk" of vegetation. The story line is good, but needs alittle more development. Is this similiar to "tentacles rape"? How did the stalks get in the water? Was there any type of posting around the secluded lake? And it ended so abruptly. Was she impregnated or just raped?

loved this story but need more to it> it was a little short. I hope you add more to this story