Deployed, Tattooed, Transformed Ch. 03

Trash

This story was total fucking trash. Being ex-military I would have kicked the skanky whore slut out the door. As for the daughter she was the ring leader af the big lie. Out the door with her whore mother.

Interesting Ending

I don't know if I would have ended this tale this way. There were many ways you could have taken this, as you stated in your closing.
Real life?

Real or not it was well written and quite compelling.

Meant for cuck lovers.

1 star for not leaving a cuck alert. What a wimp! He is an insult to military men. Nonsense.

Oh my Gawd....

What shit!

Truly loving wives

There are those who would never allow the wife to return. That is too bad and their loss.

For those who know the pain of betrayal, there is a love that transcends the pit of despair. Sometimes it is found in the arms of another that has the ability and stability to rebuild out of devastation. Sometimes it is found in the arms of the very person who brought the devastation.

It is a matter of worth. The attitude of the betrayer is the key. In this story, it is clear that the wife and daughter's concern for the welfare of the husband in combat was primary.

What should have taken place was the day after the husband returned, the wife and daughter sit him down and confess - confess it all. THEN he has options and choices he can make. They failed. The author chose to allow reconciliation. Good. However, a follow up story would have to deal with the under - cause of why the husband and wife/daughter have a basic lack of honesty and trust with each other in the home.

Not too likely

She cheated on her husband, because she really didn't care that much about him - or she wouldn't have done it! Then, when she found out that she was pregnant and she didn't know who the father was, she should have had an ABORTION! (there was no talk of religious conviction concerning abortion) Then, she has the baby that isn't his and has the nerve to name it after him! Then she gives it up for adoption! What kind of disjointed plot line is this? The writing is actually very good, just work on the wacky plots!

Crap

Another whore bitch wife can't keep her pants on and the wimp takes her back. What a load of crap

OK story, sloppy grammar!

"I wanted to make sure he loved and respected Jane, Janice and I above all things."
Would you say "He respected I"? I hope not!!!!
It should be: "I wanted to make sure he loved and respected Jane, Janice and me above all things."

Reconciliation

I'm okay with this attempt at reconciliation for several reasons: 1) Her secondary perfidy was, although stupid, intended in part to protect him from pain; 2) He has taken a clear leadership position in the family structure; 3) He has turned the focus of this family to right and wrong. They may make it, and they may all thrive individually and as a family unit. Thanks for writing a story filled with lessons for all of us.

I agree CRAP

Jane is too stupid to be believed. She leaves a newborn baby with a suicidal single guy??? She gets her 13 year old daughter involved in her stupity? Can there really be people out there like that? I would not want a Major with this guys reasoning capabilities leading me into combat.

Redemption or BTB: Redemption

This story could've gone either way. It is heartening to see love prevail; it would've been even better if Jane had remained faithful. Her seduction was apparently premeditated and calculated. She was as much a victim as anyone but still guilty of betrayal to herself, her marriage her children and her husband. The story opened up the anatomy of a marriage on the rocks with all affected parties input. The author gave us clear evidence of what was happening so the reader was well informed to establish an opinion of their own. In some cases, I prefer reconciliation if possible. Trust being reestablished is the most significant hurdle in resuming any degree of normalcy. Counseling is always a resource to consider even seriously. I found a degree of emotion muted and the scene to scene movement was not synchronized.

Too Quick to Finish

The wrap up was hand wringing quick. You made the point that it might be difficult for her to get Paul Jr back. So, what happened. I'm left to believe that she knocked on his door, told him she wanted the baby, he gave him it her and she flew back to her family. She is obviously a weak individual and might be influenced to stray one more time to complete her mission.
This story had possibilities but this last chapter didn't do it justice.
Thanks for your effort.

Piece of crap author

Author needs to stand in front of a speeding freight train for daring to write and post such a piece of unmitigated trash.

Wow really! Delete this off a erotic site

Come on at least you could have had more sex put into it.. We as readers are here to read erotic stories... Add a final story with more sex or delete this non sexual crapy story

Phil2213

I hope I meet your wife, I'll pay someone to seduce her then hopefully figure out a way to get her pregnant and I wish I could watch while you reconcile with her

Yes, stand in front of a speeding train.

A bunch of greedy bastards nearly destroyed the global economy. Pouring carbon into the atmosphere has led to possibly permanent aberrations in weather patterns which kill many people from flooding, heat and violent storms. But that stuff is practically benign compared to the horror of an adult who posts a story for which he charges nothing and in which the main character refuses to react in a way that will cause considerable collateral damage to his daughter, himself and his wife's son, who played no part in his own conception or birth. Yes, for this offense the author alone deserves to stand in front of a speeding train to instantly end his life, despite the damage to his family. Society cannot stand against the damage done by an author writing a story now and then that you don't like, anonymous. Please stay anonymous. It would make me permanently nauseous if I were to discover I knew you.

Crap

I was hoping you would be able to salvage this story after the failure of chapter 2, my hopes were obviously dashed.
Hey anonymous 7/5/13, the 2 so called adults and the daughter should die from the speeding train, taking themselves out of the gene pool. The baby will be the lone survivor and will grow up rich and powerful but will despise the dead family for leaving him alone in the world. Darwin is right once again.

The Military Mind is a very nasty piece of work

Something everyone here, especially the author, seems to forget is the mind of a frontline military officer is not like that of a civilian.
As an officer, he is very goal oriented, very political and very, very vindictive. if he was going to punish his family he would have done things much differently.

A Gunny I know here in Tokyo came home, found his Japanese wife in bed with a Japanese man, he tossed the man through a glass window and onto the street which was 3 floors down. The poor sap survived and on the day he left the hospital Gunny was there to put him back into the hospital. He of course beat the crap out of his wife, during this whole episode he never hurt his kids (aged 13, 16 and 20) but made it very clear that they were complicit for not sharing this information with him.

Now, let's compare this to a Bird Colonel who, found out his Filipina wife was cheating, he set her up to be arrested by the Japanese police for selling stimulant drugs and prostitution and then divorced her.

BTW if you are arrested by the Japanese Police for drugs very bad things happen to you, if you are a woman arrested by Popo for drugs and prostitution very, very, very bad things happen to you.

So, as you can see the Major in this story would have done something to mindfuck with his wife (the enemy) and then kept her around as a second class citizen.

Hey Anonymous!

Why can some people be so bold as to hide from their own comments and their refusal to attach themselves to their own comments. Opinions can be very situational and subjective. Anyone can make a mistake, some bigger than others. Paying someone to seduce another's wife seems totally ludicrous. In fantasy, it works well. However, in reality it is far different. If my wife could be seduced, I wouldn't want to be in a committed relationship with her let alone a marriage. I am not a prude but very traditional in my thinking about marriage and relationships. I have experienced people in varying degrees of mental health having been in a public service environment in the executive level. My formulation of opinions on such matters is from an informed perspective. My opinions are my opinions and I have no problem associating myself wth them because I have a comfort in knowing my intentions are good about myself and life in general. Life is what you make it and your selfconcept is how you endeavour your next step. You must not only evaluate for yourself by also how that impacts those you love and care deeply about firstly and then how that impacts others. Competitors and those withheld agendas hidden or otherwise will always be about but you cannot account for their being without making changes to yourself. Usually, that is the goal of certain people in trying to upset you and get your attention while they enjoy their own ego trip in doing so. So, yes I am what I am and I will do what has to be done to have the best life I can have. I will react to protect my family especially if any are sick weak or under attack in anyway shape or form. When love is at the precipice of a situation then love is the rule in guidance toward resolution. Although, I firmly believe in eye for an eye, there are priorities that preclude that luxury, which I've learned as a man that headed and raised a family. Your role as a leader in a family takes more things into consideration as you endeavour to make informed decisions. Sometimes revenge is an unaffordable luxury that bad people count on. This story is complex and the answers and judgment you make as a reader comes as easy as your position in life affords.

The wimp hiding behind the facade of "taking control".

The wimp threw a tantrum, and ran away while refusing to face his problem, then when petitioned for divorce, he refused to sign citing the BS excuse of "seeking to understand". He conveniently forgot that his running away prevented any understanding to effect.

His running was the catalyst for his daughter's mental anguish and he blamed it on the wife for letting the girl try to solve their marriage difficulty. What a total wimp. The girl is the only adult in the story.

Now in this chapter, he "tries to take control" to make himself look less of a wimp. He insists that the wife takes back the baby claiming that it's now his responsibility, but never once did he claim it as his son. He is going to be "honorable" raising the the baby as "his daughter's half brother". What bullshit. He should either shit or get of the pot already. Either the child is son or it's not and he has no business demanding anything be done about the child. What a total loser.

You need to learn

when to use, "I" and when to use, "me." You keep screwing it up. First say the sentence without the proper nouns.
( I now had a son to raise and I wanted to make sure he loved and respected I above all things.) See, it doesn't sound right. It's, (he loved and respected, "me," above all things. (Now you can add in the others without changing the personal pronoun.
I also felt the story lacked human emotion. Also, everyone is right, the guy's a real wimp. Sorry, between the technical mistakes and the content, I couldn't rate this very high.

Love is about forgiveness hard as it may be.

Despite some of the unfavourable comments I have read. As a mere woman I found this story very moving. It is indeed hard for a man use to command in the Arny to unbend and expose his feeling in this way. Nevertheless, the plot was good the story well told. Not all men are red necks who treat a wife as a possession. as some comments imply. Obviously, it might have been worthwhile to have extended the story to another chapter and made Jane a little less submissive. But as often happens with short stories it is a balance of keeping them short and letting the reader follow the thread and think about the attitudes of the characters. or making it longer to develop the issues raised by the theme. I love it and empathised with both partners.

ok this just stupid for 1 you can't get the son back he was with he's real father un the state's and you in germany you would have to prove that he suffers from depressed and is possibly suicidal fiirst there would be an investigation 2 even if he's depressed and is possibly suicidal what you can't proof the real father would say the kid can not leave the states the kid can't come to germany even if the mother is in germany this would be settled in court what will last a year or 2 this story is stupid and doesnt make any sence sorry for the bad english

Nope

Started off somewhat interestingly but went downhill in Ch 2. Chapter 3 was pretty much unreadable. The story line is headshakingly poor.

well

I read other comments. I was surprised at one showing so much sympathy to the wife
She intentionally cheated on her husband and her family. While not on birth control and not requiring her lover to use even a condom?

No, she intentionally threw her family away. Even worse having a child help cover it up. The kid will be in therapy forever.

Perhaps the wife just had buyers remorse after she did this to her family? Is she remorseful for doing such evil acts? Maybe, maybe not. The story leads you to think so but then maybe?

To forgive this level of intense betrayal, and overlook thee cold hearted callous nature of her actions/thinking shows this guy is a saint.

CRAP

TWO fucking woman together with holding the truth. Dump the cheating skank wife and let the daughter live with her shame......

Just no way.

Have a CONUS-based lawyer file to have the birth certificate corrected as to male parent, change the child's name and send Jane packing. Keep Janice and let Jane live with the little bastard and his biological father. Leave an infant with a single male with alleged mental issues? WTF? Stan and Jane deserve each other. Nice story well written that turned to crap.

Hmm,

Liked the beginning, not sure about the conclusion.

well developed story

I feel that this is a well developed story. Unlike the btb crowd who want every woman to exist in a burning hell. Paul faces his responsibilities to family even if there is an extra one. Requiring his wife to face her actions and claim the child from the sperm donator to rebuild the family unit to fully functional.

Taught Her Daughter to Lie

First chapter was a good start but went downhill from there. Mercy fuck my ass it was all about her. This taught the daughter how to lie to her dad and future spouse. Fucked up situation but I don't know of a single returning vet who would knowingly raise another man's child. This is a bullshit story not even close to reality.
Wulf_man 1962

The wife taught his daughter to be a lying piece of shit just like her mother.

Divorce her cheating ass on the grounds of adultery, then disinherit the little bitch of a daughter and tell her that she is now dead to you.

Tell her that she is as much a bastard as her bastard brother.

Also take the cunt of a wife to a tattooist and get the word WHORE in six inch high letters stamped on her worthless hide front and back.

Do all that dear annony tells you and you'll be

alone as he is. No friends no love no family, Just him and his basement and his little cock!!

Do all that dear annony tells you and you'll be

a CUCK/WIMP/SLIMY "LOSER" / PIECE OF "SHIT" ..... just like CUCKY BOY / LIMP DICK sophist801!

ANY OTHER QUESTIONS ........ WHORE WIFE APOLOGIST LOSERS???????

Loved the ending .....

Although I think it should have been both Jane and Paul should have visited Mr Cramer. Paul should have berated him for seducing another mans wife and put the fear into him without anything physical!

For all the BTB folks ..... I hope you never make one mistake in your marriage and lose the one you love because of pride!

Sorry, I won't buy it

Just another American dysfunctional family. Hurrah! Too many treacheries for that marriage to survive in real life and be able to function as a family ever after. In fantasy land; sure, anything is possible there. A tattoo in the back of her neck where she won't be able to see it (like the adulterers' A of the middle age's), won't erase her treachery to her husband, her carelessness involving her daughter in the consequences of her infidelity, and will do nothing to rebuild the lost trust. Now, on top of that he even accepts the living proof of her treachery and will bring him up as the loving son he could have fathered himself, but his wife did it with another man. Like I said, I won't buy it. Interesting story anyway.

I've seen this happen to many times.

This story really hit home with me, being a retired soldier. As you might of guessed it happened to me. I was on a 15 month deployment, when an old buddy called and congratulated me on my new son! To say I was shocked was an understatement! I immediately took emergency leave and flew home unanounced. When I walked in the front door my older kids raced to me happy that I was home. My wife sat there dumbfounded feeding her new baby! She started shaking and crying, it was my oldest daughter came and stood by me, my son was too young to understand. But in his haste to let everyone know I was home, called his aunt, I can picture the "oh shit" look on her face right through the phone! She was there in less than 30 minutes! My wife's sister took all the kids so we could talk, and boy did we! I found out it was a one time thing, fueled by depression and alcohol. It took quite a while but we made it through the ordeal. I took terminal leave and retired. I took a job on the other side of the country, moved my family there with me. I gave my wife one option, get the asshole to give up custody of the child, or she could stay there with him! He was all to willing to get rid of his responsibility! When my wife came to join us 3 days later, I knocked her up as fast as I could! I now have 4 children, 2 of each! Just to find out how sorry my wife was about the whole thing, I had one more demand of her, a get out of jail free card for later use. I thought about using it on her sister, but she's married. So there it is, some would say I'm a wimp, or a cuckold. But I'm neither, I'm just a soldier who fought and won 2 wars. You see, all one has in life is honor, mine is intact, and I'm happy with what I have! By the way, my oldest daughter is still giving my wife hell over it, and it's been 5 years! She loves her daddy!!

ramonbrook

I can think of numerous ways for the wife to have helped the supposedly suicidal lover out without having sex with him. Difficulty believing anyone could be that stupid.
She must have had some emotional bond with him to willingly give in so easily to that seduction technique.
For those who say it was one mistake-improperly subtracting a check in the checkbook is a mistake.
Committing adultery is a choice. A thought out decision. Perhaps a bad choice, a terrible decision and a much regretted one.
If husband had been absent for a year and one night feeling lonely and depressed went out with friends too much to drink run into old flame-that scenario might be worked through. If she confessed. But she hid pregnancy and birth.
More to the point he was not awsy from her thst long and she had plenty of time to confess.
Sorry! I am not some wild eyed BTB person but what she did is so far past one little oh excuse me mistake.
Anyone who wants to give spouse another chance that is up to them. More power to them
BUT FOR RAMONBROOK AND HIS KIND TO SAY THIS WAS JUST A MISTAKE IS LUDICROUS.
NOT TO MENTION HOW MANY OF THEIR FRIENDS AND FAMILIES KNEW OF THIS LITTLE MISTAKE AND CONSPIRED TO KEEP HIM IN THE DARK. ANYONE WHO SAW THE BABY!ALL THOSE WHO KNEW SHE HAD A BSBY THST JUST DISAPPEARED. EVERYONE AT HER WORKPLACE
Seems the little mistake just gets bigger with each passing thought.
Just how insidious does a betrayal and concerted deception have to be before you look at the actions as more than one little mistake?

This is real life

Things like this happen all the time, whether your in the military or not. No one likes infidelity whether it is done by the male or female, but reality with one time affairs more marriages come back together, usually weak at the start but stronger after time. This story represents the real world of relationships.

Pussy

Nuff said.