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My Sister Saved My Life

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by Anonymous

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by digdaddyrich01/05/10

interesting story line

A little on the sci-fi side and a great fantasy. Well done!
Thanks for the good read.

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by Amyfriend01/05/10

Very stimulating story,

with a brilliant plot. (But really all I'm asking for is just a tiny, tiny dab of 713 for the men in my life...please.) Well done.

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by Anonymous01/05/10

Dreams

Ahhhh, the adolescent dreams of a 12 year old. Silly at best.

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by SPEN STERLING01/05/10

awesome

I thought this was hilarious. Great idea, plus a great fantasy!

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by AzPilot01/06/10

I agree- a good idea, well written

A funny story, with a twist, well done. Thanks.

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by Anonymous01/06/10

Great idea.

Loved the concept, great idea. Thanks.

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by Anonymous01/06/10

Weapon?

In the wrong hands this could be used as a powerful weapon

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by sexmate01/07/10

EXCELLENT STORY LINE

Now this is a concept that I haven't read till now!
Excellent story line and very imaginative!
Thanks for writing!
sexmate

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by Anonymous01/07/10

Fun read

Very imaginative. Fun to read.

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by Anonymous01/25/10

so-so

just so-so it could have been so much better if it had more brother sister sex she was barely there at all wasn't worth being in the incest area she should have been the only one to help him not some bunch of strangers it defeats the incest title

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by VictorDoUrden06/20/10

Kinda...

It a bit corny here and there, overall its amusing and the ending makes me wonder where is the next chapter.

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by Anonymous11/09/10

More sister needed!!

The sister saving part was good but More sister brother action would have been appreciated

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by Anonymous11/14/12

TITLE HAS LITTLE TO DO WITH STORY

for the title to work with this story the SISTER should be the only one to help him not a bunch of nameless sluts. THIS IS SUPOSED TO BE THE INCEST AREA not a little incest then the sluts take over area. do a total rewrite and leave the extra sluts out and keep the sex to just the brother and sister.

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by jane marwood02/21/13

5*****

Loved it. Would have liked it to be longer.

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by Wmsraub04/12/14

i want some

please where can I get some 713

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by Anonymous04/26/14

to good

to good to be real but if it s real give me the address,PLEASE,PLEASE.

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by Anonymous06/26/15

Story is awesome make a part 2 Sis could help with recovery

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by Privates1stClass08/02/15

A good sister, indeed

When a guy's life hangs by a thread and the only thing that will save him is a good fucking by his sister, I say, "Way to go, sis!"

Not many guys can say they have a sister who cares as much. A well-told story which shows how much sibling love can save lives.

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