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Never ask if you should continue.
Do painters ask if they should keep painting? Do piano players ask if they should keep playing? This sucked, but it is your story and not the readers', so you decide what the hell you want. Why do you care what other individuals think about it? You will never be good at this if that is your approach. (You may never be good at it any way, but give it a go.)
hockey mom
That was a good story.
Grammar
Shame so many 'authors' fail to proof read their stories before they post them - and make so many silly spelling and grammar mistakes that the story becomes very hard to believe.
At least keep writing until you....
...can develop a full story, complete with premise, set-up, character development,a conclusion that makes a statement etc. etc.
Gotta love hockey mom"s!!
As a hockey coach I agree with you 100% hockey mom's rule. I would do almost all of them. Nothing like looking down their pants at their thongs, g-strings or commando or even down their tops as they help dress their kids and ask you to tie their skates.. Oh they smell so fucking awesome you want to just blow your load in their faces , hot pussy or asses on the spot.... They know you are looking and they are turned on by it. Their husbands don't pay them attention like they used to because they are so tied up in the kids hockey. You could finger them or fuck them right in front of their husband"s and they wouldn"t even notice it... So all you hockey mom's the coaches want you so PLEASE give us a hint that you are interested as well.. We will do you in a heart beat.. Thank you to the author and to Hockey mom's everywhere, please continue to expose yourselves to us.. ;-)
Gotta love hockey mom"s!!
As a hockey coach I agree with you 100% hockey mom's rule. I would do almost all of them. Nothing like looking down their pants at their thongs, g-strings or commando or even down their tops as they help dress their kids and ask you to tie their skates.. Oh they smell so fucking awesome you want to just blow your load in their faces , hot pussy or asses on the spot.... They know you are looking and they are turned on by it. Their husbands don't pay them attention like they used to because they are so tied up in the kids hockey. You could finger them or fuck them right in front of their husband"s and they wouldn"t even notice it... So all you hockey mom's the coaches want you so PLEASE give us a hint that you are interested as well.. We will do you in a heart beat.. Thank you to the author and to Hockey mom's everywhere, please continue to expose yourselves to us.. ;-)
Interesting story
That was an interesting story. The writing isn't very good but that is compensated by a strong feeling of believabilty. I mean, if that happened to you it was a very interesting experience and thanks for sharing. If it was just your imagination ... well, you are a good story teller!
Oh hell Yea! Please continue
You still have to fuck her yet. The story is just getting started. I hope that she wants to continue having sex with him and wind up having a long lasting sexual affair. Thanks for the good post.
I hate cheating fuck slut whores
and this skank bitch is no exception.....what is it about these fucking bitches that they think it is ok to spread their legs for any macho cunt and let him fuck her....hope she gets a dose of the clap or AIDs and then passes it on to her hubby then the sorry assed bitch will realise just what a skank she is....he should kick her sorry ass out in to the gutter.....fucking whores
Damn
Fucking cheating cunts. Don't continue.
Great story!!
You should write more stories. You are very very good!
a hot and unplanned hookup
loved how you used the privacy of a snow covered soccer mom van to get this going. more please!
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