by LittleRedHen
The story may have been short but it was awesome!!! It had everything a sex story should have. I loved it!!!
U took my breath away. I got very, very horny reading your story. Keep writing about hot lesbian sex. I am also into women and my name is also Jasmine
Thanks so much for all the comments, I'm blushing! Much appreciated! xx
You make the reader feel the texture of the moment, the touch, the aroma, the taste and the sounds. Very, very nice.
I liked this story a lot. It was very well written and a fun read. Well done LittleRedHen I hope you write more stories.
You're one of the few writers who knows that a lady's ejaculation is clear and sweet. Every other writer discribes it differently. Sweet and clear is the best way to describe it. I've only known 2 ladies in my limited sexual "career" that squirted but it is so lovely.
Good and sexy writing, too, by the way. Thank you.
thanks for the story. i was a nice escape before I go to bed... thinking of an adventure in a bathroom!
beautiful character-building. And the most arousing sex. Thank you.
Quick and passionate - your style took my breath away.
And well done for your combination of an original location for a first-time in best party rags and your high and dry ending. (So many stories are not particularly original).
Looking forward to reading LOTs more from you (hint, hint :-)
R.
Breath taking, has left me gasping. So rude, so sexy and so utterly brilliant. I wish it was me...
Lots of cum kisses
Amy
text her tomorrow after you get up. I can just imagine the fantasies she will have tonight. Stupid boyfriend might even get lucky.