by JJMurray
disjointed, not my cup of tea, and a kilo of morphine will kill an elephant, let alone a human.
A little more homework and this could be excellant. The build was good, but seemed rushed at the end of this segment. I look forward to the next installment and more explanation.
Hey this is something nice coming from an Indian author. I agree that the ending is a bit hurried but the story is shockingly harsh and definitely sexy. I had a good time. Waiting to see how it finishes.
don't start something u can't finish...mrbill
I like this story, it's obviously a common fantasy for a man to have his wife cuckold him, but watching her being raped is also arousing, bringing out a range of conflicting emotions. I may try my hand at a similar story.
this much was a waste of time.
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Whoever wrote this is sick
"there's no reason why I should suffer stories that aren't worth the 'paper' that they are written on."
Please, heed your own advice.