by SadieRose
..this story. Great job as usual. I really like the fact that I am able to clearly visualize your characters, and their surroundings.
Looking forward for your next submission.
<squeals in delight> I have a slight crush on Rain so it was nice to be reminded that he likes chicks too! LOL
I read the story the second time replacing small, high breasts and soft pale skin with my own large firm breasts and smooth milk chocolate skin and had myself a BLAST!! LMAO Thanx hon and keep em coming
As usual, it involves the emotions and the physical.
Tugs the heartstrings for a lonely girl with no self esteem.
Boy, she sure has it now!!!!
All my best, iguana
I've read all of your stories but just thought I'd comment here, they are all wonderful! Please write more
Stunningly beautiful. I cried when he left, though. I know what that dread feels like when someone who made you feel so whole leaves your life.
Overall, stunningly beautiful story.
... seeking and finding the White Rabbit in Wonderland!
An absolutely great story. Keep them coming - Please!
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