Is way out of my comfort zone, personally I hate being submissive, bound, humilated and all the rest. Not my idea of fun at all.
by
Anonymous01/07/10
OK, but
Bizarre story, but enjoyable in spots. But do watch your plot as Helen somehow ended in bed with Ian at the very end.
by
Anonymous01/07/10
Much better
OK. Finally I like Jane. She and her husband are in sync with their bondage and fetish play and both are enjoying themselves. I still think Jane was quite a fool in the first few chapters. If she really cared about her husband she would have been much more careful as she tried things out. She was very careless with his life. She has now learned and truly seems sorry for her mistakes.
I would have liked a little more payback for Cecelia but at least she didn't do any more damage.
We had plenty of hot semi-non-consensual sex in the previous chapters; this gives us actual closure on the story itself. And it nicely makes up for Jane's behavior early on.
by
Anonymous10/09/12
lackluster ending...
Cecily didn't get punished at all or even stopped from doing it to others. Jane was such a poor, careless mistress in the beginning that I felt she should have gotten some payback as well.
by
Anonymous12/07/13
Totally unsatisfactory
Cecily walks away unpunished. Jane doesn't really seem sorry for nearly killing her husband. And it suddenly feels like Jane and Ian are bigger bondage freaks than Brian and Chloe. I still think Ian should dump Jane and find a woman that doesn't enjoy abusing and humiliating him. Who would want a woman like that? Bitches be crazy! This story was bollucks.
by
Anonymous03/12/14
fucking good
It is perfect....but cecily needs to get punished....she is sadist bitch...n jane should go a little bit easy on her husband
This
Is way out of my comfort zone, personally I hate being submissive, bound, humilated and all the rest. Not my idea of fun at all.
OK, but
Bizarre story, but enjoyable in spots. But do watch your plot as Helen somehow ended in bed with Ian at the very end.
Much better
OK. Finally I like Jane. She and her husband are in sync with their bondage and fetish play and both are enjoying themselves. I still think Jane was quite a fool in the first few chapters. If she really cared about her husband she would have been much more careful as she tried things out. She was very careless with his life. She has now learned and truly seems sorry for her mistakes.
I would have liked a little more payback for Cecelia but at least she didn't do any more damage.
Great conclusion
We had plenty of hot semi-non-consensual sex in the previous chapters; this gives us actual closure on the story itself. And it nicely makes up for Jane's behavior early on.
lackluster ending...
Cecily didn't get punished at all or even stopped from doing it to others. Jane was such a poor, careless mistress in the beginning that I felt she should have gotten some payback as well.
Totally unsatisfactory
Cecily walks away unpunished. Jane doesn't really seem sorry for nearly killing her husband. And it suddenly feels like Jane and Ian are bigger bondage freaks than Brian and Chloe. I still think Ian should dump Jane and find a woman that doesn't enjoy abusing and humiliating him. Who would want a woman like that? Bitches be crazy! This story was bollucks.
fucking good
It is perfect....but cecily needs to get punished....she is sadist bitch...n jane should go a little bit easy on her husband
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Wedding Bondage Ch. 04 or
More submissions by oggbashan.