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Eden's Fruit, Final Bite

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by Anonymous

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by vrosej1001/30/10

Holy Crap!

Brilliant words, brilliant imagery. Bravo!

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by Sapphos Sister02/14/10

How can Eve resist?

Eden's luscious juice
excites my tongue, arousing
ceaseless wantonness.....

A beautiful suite of erotic haiku. Such talent!

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by Dr_Genome03/01/10

Fantastic

set of haiku

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by tazz31701/10/12

A SONNET FOR THE 1ST PAIR

of what may have happened. TK U MLJ LV NV

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