Yawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwn...Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzz Will you wake me up after you stop writing this dialogoue or monologoue or whatever fuck this is ? Its definately not porn writing by any stretch of imagination. Please stop this torture :)
The story reads like a real life chronicle. Good job. Thanks
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Anonymous01/11/10
Guilt confessions
This sounds like the guilt confessions of a middle aged ordinary woman. Please decide if Cat wants her brains fucked out or not ? Helppppp ...I have lost this meandering monologue of a plot :)
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Anonymous03/10/10
Sorry, but this is just dull
There's way too much dialogue and not enough fucking, after all, this is supposed to be a (written) porn site isn't it?
To the various anon comments earlier, I have a novel suggestion for you......if you dont like it, don't read it!!!!! I for one enjoy your writing a lot. I find it very erotic and can't wait to read more!
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Anonymous12/06/11
Westcountryperv
If I don't read it how will I know if I like it or not? duh
English
Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Yawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwn...Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzz Will you wake me up after you stop writing this dialogoue or monologoue or whatever fuck this is ? Its definately not porn writing by any stretch of imagination. Please stop this torture :)
Fucking in the pool is hard to accomplish
The story reads like a real life chronicle. Good job. Thanks
Guilt confessions
This sounds like the guilt confessions of a middle aged ordinary woman. Please decide if Cat wants her brains fucked out or not ? Helppppp ...I have lost this meandering monologue of a plot :)
Sorry, but this is just dull
There's way too much dialogue and not enough fucking, after all, this is supposed to be a (written) porn site isn't it?
Dont read it then
To the various anon comments earlier, I have a novel suggestion for you......if you dont like it, don't read it!!!!! I for one enjoy your writing a lot. I find it very erotic and can't wait to read more!
Westcountryperv
If I don't read it how will I know if I like it or not? duh
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