All Comments on 'Worship'

Your writing is among the very best here, as you always create provocative plots with compelling setups. BUT this story stops too soon -- or should I say it peters out? It begs for more, if only to wrap up her one-off experience more fully. Better yet would be a further elaboration of the central conceit, like having her experience other encounters and changing in her receptivity to being 'worshipped' by a cum bath, or whatever. Please consider extending the character, plot & their fertile ground for further invention!

Didn’t like all of the cheesy King James English. Is that how one, in your mind, expresses adoration or worship? Really?