it was a bit confusing early on, who was fucking who, but then it got better when moving on to screwing Mother. Great story, writing could have been better.
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Anonymous01/21/10
hairy Mom
Yes, somewhat erratic, I agree. But, I enjoy the fact that Mom has a hairy bush.
Lots of well defined discriptive sex scenes. Pity about the minor mistakes which took away from the fairly good flow of events. I would suggest reading over your material at least twice on different days before submitting. Another idea is to have someone else read it over before submitting. Otherwise it was a good story that could have been a great story. Thanks for the read.
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Anonymous01/31/10
Keep the hairy pussy.Nothing better.
I liked your story alot. Hope they stay together and fuck like bunnies for a long time.
This is a fine story and a realistic approach to a Mother/Son incestuous relationship. I'm happy to see that the series is to be contiued.
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Anonymous05/23/10
Lover of All Moms
This was real great and I am going to go further and see if I can find more and if any of them is as good as this one the Author will hear from me.
Thanks Loads and keep up the Good Work.
BILL
its perfectly natural for the mother to offer her treasure to her son. i love spooning with mom and pressing my dick against her ass, catching glimpses of her hairy pussy and the way she giggles and teases me with it... i want nothing more than to cum inside her hairy mystery with her back to me, pushing her ass back against me, the perfect gift
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Anonymous01/10/15
another excellent story from MTB
And I love the comment from the reader who's wild about his mother's hairy pussy. That's one of the great things about fine stories like MTB's. They elicit tales of real-life motherfucking from readers who've been there--or up in there, to be precise. We get a better idea of what it's like when a young guy is in a continuing easy-going intimate relationship with his mom. When he feels the urge and just goes and finds his mother and shoves his hard young cock up the same cunt he same out of. Man, it must be the greatest rush in the world. To revisit your own damn birth canal, stuff and stretch, slam and pound it with your powerful prick, and blow your balls up where you were once a baby. And meanwhile mom is loving every minute of getting her brains fucked loose by her darling baby boy. She knows full well the truth of the old sayings, "a boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other" and "son-fucked twat is a happy twat."
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Anonymous10/09/15
Damn
I'm over 60 myself and for someone who's over sixty, I'm surprised you haven't taught yourself to use words better. Your misuse of words detracts from your story. And that's a shame.
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Anonymous10/16/15
Another fun read
I enjoyed this chapter. You write em and I'll read em. Thanks for writing this.
Warren
English
Erratic
Erratic and hard to read. Get an editor.
Great Story but . . .
it was a bit confusing early on, who was fucking who, but then it got better when moving on to screwing Mother. Great story, writing could have been better.
hairy Mom
Yes, somewhat erratic, I agree. But, I enjoy the fact that Mom has a hairy bush.
Confusing, didn't know who Press was
It would have been better to have known who Press was when Alice asked Wayne if it would bother him if she fucked Press.
Other places were a little hard to follow. One spot was when she asked Press to come to bed or lock the door on his way out.
All in all the story is very erotic and hope that the next chapter will follow soon. Thanks
enjoyed
Personally, I liked the parts that had ambiguity. Keep up the writing and don't be distracted by critics.
Great start!!!!!!!
SEXY SEXY!!!!!! Keep the stories coming.
I liked the overall plot.
Lots of well defined discriptive sex scenes. Pity about the minor mistakes which took away from the fairly good flow of events. I would suggest reading over your material at least twice on different days before submitting. Another idea is to have someone else read it over before submitting. Otherwise it was a good story that could have been a great story. Thanks for the read.
Keep the hairy pussy.Nothing better.
I liked your story alot. Hope they stay together and fuck like bunnies for a long time.
Realism
This is a fine story and a realistic approach to a Mother/Son incestuous relationship. I'm happy to see that the series is to be contiued.
Lover of All Moms
This was real great and I am going to go further and see if I can find more and if any of them is as good as this one the Author will hear from me.
Thanks Loads and keep up the Good Work.
BILL
good story!
this was a very good story!
Glad I found this series.
I have just discovered this author and this sounds like the start of a great series.
WOW
What an incredible story. I hope he stays with his mom and becomes her new husband/lover.
Been there done that.
Yes moms need loving too.
good start...
but if u had 2 years of high school left,,,,,how old were you,,,,hot,i really enjoy ur stories,want more
love that hairy pussy
its perfectly natural for the mother to offer her treasure to her son. i love spooning with mom and pressing my dick against her ass, catching glimpses of her hairy pussy and the way she giggles and teases me with it... i want nothing more than to cum inside her hairy mystery with her back to me, pushing her ass back against me, the perfect gift
another excellent story from MTB
And I love the comment from the reader who's wild about his mother's hairy pussy. That's one of the great things about fine stories like MTB's. They elicit tales of real-life motherfucking from readers who've been there--or up in there, to be precise. We get a better idea of what it's like when a young guy is in a continuing easy-going intimate relationship with his mom. When he feels the urge and just goes and finds his mother and shoves his hard young cock up the same cunt he same out of. Man, it must be the greatest rush in the world. To revisit your own damn birth canal, stuff and stretch, slam and pound it with your powerful prick, and blow your balls up where you were once a baby. And meanwhile mom is loving every minute of getting her brains fucked loose by her darling baby boy. She knows full well the truth of the old sayings, "a boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other" and "son-fucked twat is a happy twat."
Damn
I'm over 60 myself and for someone who's over sixty, I'm surprised you haven't taught yourself to use words better. Your misuse of words detracts from your story. And that's a shame.
Another fun read
I enjoyed this chapter. You write em and I'll read em. Thanks for writing this.
Warren
So good!
Love it, and there's more :D
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