always good for a laugh. The outrageous and asinine re-used, cliche, and totally predictable plots written as only JPB can. Whatever you think about him, you have to hand that to him, only he could write hundreds of stories and use just a few plot lines. Good on ya!!!
I'm really torn on this one...on the one hand, whoring out his mom is funny for the crap she pulled...on the other hand, allowing your wife to fuck other men and "becoming brave enough" to eat their cum? Time to come out of the closet, homo-boy!
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Anonymous01/10/10
yeah for once
boring in everypoint, not even erotic is lacking even emotions. but at least a bit funny.
Wish there was an award for the worst story on the site. This one would win hands down. Exceptionally sick plot. I rated it 1 coz that was the lowest rating available. Mom sets up daughter in law, son accepts it then allows wife to continue that life then sets his mom up? I mean just WTF was JPB thinking when he wrote this... Your skills as a writer are never in doubt your one of the better writers out there so it was shocking to see you come up with something like this.
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JPB.....just plain boring...but...
always good for a laugh. The outrageous and asinine re-used, cliche, and totally predictable plots written as only JPB can. Whatever you think about him, you have to hand that to him, only he could write hundreds of stories and use just a few plot lines. Good on ya!!!
ROFLMAO!
Very Funny!
stupid vimp story
stupid story
Funny...but idiotic.
I'm really torn on this one...on the one hand, whoring out his mom is funny for the crap she pulled...on the other hand, allowing your wife to fuck other men and "becoming brave enough" to eat their cum? Time to come out of the closet, homo-boy!
yeah for once
boring in everypoint, not even erotic is lacking even emotions. but at least a bit funny.
Very funny
Quirky and twisted funny
He hates his father that much?
That's basically what this boils down to. To get revenge on his mother for setting up his wife, he's turned his father into an unsuspecting cuckold.
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A light fast moving erotic and funny story
Well done,I like the way he thinks. Thanks
ROFL!
Not the story I was expecting. Very high-spirited! ;-)
Just too weird.
So I rated it 1*.
Worst story on this site.
Wish there was an award for the worst story on the site. This one would win hands down. Exceptionally sick plot. I rated it 1 coz that was the lowest rating available. Mom sets up daughter in law, son accepts it then allows wife to continue that life then sets his mom up? I mean just WTF was JPB thinking when he wrote this... Your skills as a writer are never in doubt your one of the better writers out there so it was shocking to see you come up with something like this.
You are wrong
Karan you are wrong. The worst story is that crap by indiansubmale. At least this guy made a buck out of it. A cuck buck but a buck never the less.
Now I understand
Why JPB is JPB. He got it from his MOTHER. Like mother like son...
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