My Sex Diary, 2010: Ch. 01

Loved it!

I'm a real fan of true stories, and they don't get much more true than this sex blog. Here's to a very sexy 2010 for Jennifer, and my hope that she takes us along with her all year!

Look Forward To More

I really look forward to more of your "blogs." I like the honesty of your words - a little like amateur porn. The only advice I would give (others may not agree) would be to used more flavorful words than "goop"! You don't have to get technical but "cum", "load", "jizz", anything sounds better than "goop". But keep up the good work and keep us informed.

Loved it!

Great description of BJ! Almost like I was there! Keep up the good work. Hope you have a really active 2010.

hooray

Quite enjoyable. I like the blog idea a lot.

I agree with the others--

it was very good. Please keep up the writing, your plot and execution was good as well. Thank you for a good read.

One Problem

One problem. If this is all true then you're already taken.

A new and exciting approach to erotic story writing

I like your idea of writing in the form of a diary approach . Although it has in some ways been done before, I think the way you have approached the task is very good. Well written and the story moves at a good pace, which will need a lot of material to keep the idea going. Whether the stories are real or not doesn't matter, your writing makes them seen as if they are. Good luck with your endeavor and hope to see more of your work in the future.

I enjoyed it

Very refreshing, stimulating from a different point of view and approach. I'll look forward to reading more of your adventures as they happen or occur. But like the aspect of knowing what your "thoughts" were, or in remembering while all this was going on.

I'll save suggestions, well...not really suggestions, but perhaps some friendly advise/critique after I'd read a few more.

Many Feathers

Fresh and Exciting

This is a lovely approach - I almost feel guilty of having stolen into your room and picked the lock of your diary and reading your deepest and most secret thoughts...well guilty and aroused! Very much looking forward to the next!

really great

Stroking to it right now. I would've liked to hear more about your masturbation session at the end but I loved your blowjob description. One of the better ones I've read.

Hi, I loved your first story and I'm looking forward to the others. It sounds like you really enjoy giving head, that's nice. I'm not afraid of my own cum. If a chick lets me nut in her mouth I'm definitely going to be grateful enough to want to kiss her. Thanks for sharing it. Nick
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