by regularguy13
Hope you did not waste too much time writing this.
Normally I like short chapters but only when they are a good quick complete read. But I am really interested in how things turn out.
Lose the apostrophe in "Monroe's." Apostrophe applications are very simple. Learn them. Look up "gamut" and "gambit" and see if you can keep them straight. The word is "recurring," not "re-occurring." This is the last chapter I will read. You are expecting too much from readers to put up with a string of porn poppers.
You told us in ch 3 that "they" gave the 'boot' to males that continually had hard-ons. Either somebody's going to have to change the rules or daddiy's going to have to start wearing a jock & say that he injured his dick in some way until he can learn to control himself around the women. What's he going to do? Kick himself out, THE OWNER of the place?
A great scenario, but you're wrecking it. Get brave, let's have some family sex. Let's open the camp to sex, public sex. Let's see at least one of the girls give her cherry to her daddy. Both of them giving themselves to their mother. Something!
I'd prefer to read a more substantial submission less frequently than a few paragraphs daily. If it's too short, it becomes harder to get into the story before it's over. It's kind of like watching something on television where you have 5-6 minutes of program, interupted by 2 minutes of commercials. Over and over. No complaints about the content, except that there isn't enough of it.
The chapters are a little short but keep going with the development of the characters and the plot. Dad seems to be the focus of this. Does mom get any action?
Hey Don't want to sound pushy but where is the N0.5,6,7 , It's just starting to get good , Please make it longer ,, Please don't hold back,LOL, Thanks
Very hot scenario, using his daughter's help to relieve his erection problem. Looking forward to more.
You don´t know the "Pain in the ass" that is being a teenager in a nudist family."Take care of that, now!"...
Since they own the place, it should be within their power to change the rules. Although this coyness is fun for now, they may find it more fun to either change the rules, or to relax the enforcement of them.
Why is the title in first person, but the stories are written in third person?
I'm a 41yo nudist dad. Bev and I have 2 teen sons and 3 teen daughters. My divorced sister lives with us with her teen son and 2 teen daughters. We all are always naked at home together and we are very open with each other. We love the way we live. I'll post more about us if anyone wants to hear more.
Good for you guys homenudistfamily. although must be tough presented and teased with the forbidden fruit of daughters.
Had a buddy in hs whose mom was very, very open minded about boys. She drove us to and from school and many times had to pull off the road to let us finish stroking away. Quite often it was doing each other. She never made us stop but did ask that we not get cum on the car seat. One time she did tell her son to wipe his chin before going into school.