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by greenmountaineer01/13/10

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Nicely done; like your truck driver ode, it establishes a nice rhythm and moves a little frenzied but still towards its destination. I might have used fewer iconic examples, but that may be just a personal preference; another quibble: "Guernica" sent me in a different direction than the others.

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by tazz31709/05/12

WHAT IF ONE DOSNT CARE TO SEIZE

but to accept and survive. TK U MLJ LV NV

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