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Halfway There
Once he killed Vic, he should have killed her as well. Watch both of them die in agony and tell Steve she disappeared. Might as well go all the way...
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Is a true wimp. He couldn't hit the bastard more than twice, even in the story.
Have to agree with the previous commenter.
He was just a wimp even in the final analysis. He had ample reason to kill both of them, but instead of beating Vic to death as he should have, he just hit him a couple of love taps and then pushed him into the quicksand. And as for the bitch, he should have gotten rid of her years ago but couldn't find the balls to do it. After she had him beaten to death he couldn't raise a hand to her. If what these people do to the poor cucky husband is so bad that they supposedly lose their souls and their good nature the poor little cuck should be able to at least beat the wife and disfigure her just a little bit. Oh well.
Seriously, he should have been able to see some more overt signs of her extreme disrespect and disloyalty and took the kid and moved on with his life. There is nothing wrong with being a good and gentle man, but there should be something underneath that too. Didn't like it much.
Damn Pappy7
Pappy, I have almost nothing to add in regards to good ole Vic, or the wife, simply because you said it all. However, what he should have done before he left the slut, was, used the stun gun on her damn pussy and destroyed all of her nerve endings in her twat which would have left her without any way to enjoy getting screwed. Then he also should have done the same to her nipples destroying those too. that would have left her so fucked up she would have mentally went crazy. Now, as far as the story goes, my thought on it are, it was well written, well put together, and entertaining to read. 5 star to the author. ( well I guess I was automatically signed out for some reason so I'll just say who I am lol.) sinsational83.again a good story.
WOW ANGRY HUBBY
LoooooooooooooooooooooooooVe it. Its about time for the good guys to win. Well done! Yeah I know that it is fiction! But I still love it! Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 10 stars = 100 % Bye.
Sweet!
But she still got off easy. He should have done something a bit more permanent so she would never forget.
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