All Comments on 'Seven Year Itch Ch. 04'

I agree with you people should stop writing bad comments but wno reads them for you because i think your as dumb as a post either that or your in prison.

of stylized dialogue 5 stars

Sorry, but this one really is off the wall. Where are you taking this character and why. Surely no one can be so hung up on a sexual experience that they dump their whole life for it. Plus good ol Jerome, what a guy, has two kids he won't even acknowledge and more on the way! Real high class person, perhaps these two do deserve each other as they seem only concerned about themselfs-self centered is mild when considering these two. Interesting that you have never mentioned the husband again, guess that never was much of a marriage, at least it didn't make any long term impression on your character. So, interesting to see what you do with them...at this point I really dislike them both so if it wasn't for the kids (am I the only one concerned about them) I like to see dani and Jerome both crash and burn.

Dani loves putting out for Jerome, he makes her feel like she is in heaven pleasing her all the time. She will do anything for Jerome for the way that he makes her feel. Dani has no regrets and looks forward to every time they can get together to hook up. Nicely written story that has a woman who has found someone that makes her feel complete and satisfied. Thanks for sharing a well organized and crafted story.

Sad piece of wrting. And sad writer. This isn't a story, this is a jumble of words and phrases interspersed with ravings of a mad woman and a mad writer. Seek help.

she is goin to have to wake up and get tied , i know she has to submit to him and take his black cock again and again but both need to stop the baby factory

And his nigger stories.

He's not a man.

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He wanted to knock up another mans wife, he did. What is wrong with that man?

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Gee, what did you think was gonna happen? He got you to do everything he wanted and now you wonder what kind of man he is? Do you have two brain cells to rub together???

You gotta love a character that does everything to prove she's a dumb slut and then gets called one and gets upset!

This character is a loser, just like her black lover. They deserve each other.

I love the filthy, wanton stream of consciousness. Keep it pumping.:-)

iliked she has become his sub and must have his bbc, i want bareback also but i am tied, lol, she is hot butnot smart

he will fuck her even if she takes pill or gets tied, i think he will be back he likes what she gives him we all know she will because she must have bbc now

What do you do Kathy, go out and tackle the garbage guys? I'm shocked, ha ha ha ha! tell us again how much you love hubbie, we all want to be him. Ha Ha Ha Ha!

Please continue this story. The negative comments that come from people ignore. What do they expect is going to be on a sight like this. Nursey rhimes. Do continue showing her advancement as BBC slut.

a lot of b/s.

doesn't touch her. Big black big black bullshit. and always will be!!

Dani is getting what she needs, good black cock and a black baby. She knows black cock is the only cock for her. She loves being a black baby breeder like all white women should be.

Its natural for the superior Alpha Black male to breed other men's wives. African Phallus has natural breeding rights on ALL women. BBC Worship is the true religion.

What the fuck? I'm so tired of all these delusional ass people frtishizing the absolute FUCK out of Black penis as if ALL fucking Black men have perfect superhuman dicks. YOU ARE AN IDIOT IF YOU BELIEVE THAT BLACK MEN:

1. HAVE LARGER DICKS THAN ANY OTHER MEN ON AVERAGE

2. ARE GENETICALLY SEXUAL DEVIANTS OR OVERLY SEXUAL BECAUSE OF BEING BLACK

These fucking concepts come from White European slavers being afraid of people different/darker than them. If you fetishize BLACK DICK, you are disgusting and racist and I hope and pray you never come into contact with a Black male in any sexual context.