- All
Comments (11) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
Well Crafted Story
...but I wouyld have loved to find out why Sarah did not come there. A sequel is definately in order, perhaps with a happier ending in store?
Awesome
Very well written story. It's very rare to see such a good
Story in here, i just loved it.
Great story, want more
Well-written, intense sex, and sweet overall plot. Just one problem: I want a sequel.
Very Good Story.
I loved this story, and you gave me the greatest window into the eyes of a blind man. You must write a sequal for it!
Beautiful - just beautiful!
I loved the descriptions and text - I was blind for 2 and a half years, when I was 8, and when I got my sight back - there were so many words that I had learned that I didn't what they were when I saw them for the first time - they explained what a roller coaster was when I got on it but until I saw one I never understood what it was. PLEASE - write some more on this story - it needs an ending!!!!!
Carcam
I think that all of us must have our own memory of "red", but this was especially poignant and one of the best stories of all time! All of the other stories of this author are exceptional! Thank you for your thoughtful and sensitive writing.
good story but bittersweet
Follow up
Kind of a sad ending hope you follow up this.
Like the others said...
...please do make a sequel to this sweet tale :-)
/K
Needs a sequel!
REALLY WANTS A SEQUEL!
Great writing!
Really well written, but...
I wish I hadn't read it. Or literotica would put the tags at the beginning, so I would have been prepared ("heartbreak").
I guess I come to romance for "true love" and this one made me really sad.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A Memory of Red or
More submissions by Route66Girl.