I'm lucky to have found this. I read Ch 8 first (it was brand new) and now I'm back to read them in order.
You're a great story teller. Great imagination, believable plot that moves along nicely, well written, you make the characters likeable.
Gary
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Anonymous01/30/11
wow
im excited for what's next! better be hooot...
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Anonymous09/29/11
wheres the rough ass fuckin =[ GREAT story though. had to rub one out to a pic of my cousin..
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Anonymous02/24/12
U do it again
I read the ch. before this.......my pussy was so wet. Now you get me even wetter! My girlfriend and I licked each other like there is no tomorrow!!! What's goin to happen next!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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Anonymous06/23/12
too much
this guy is a bit too creepy for my taste - slinking on the floor going into her clothes - he needs to flirt more directly and see what she does
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Wonderful series.
I greatly enjoy this series, all 3 chapters have been fantastic.
This is great stuff!
I'm lucky to have found this. I read Ch 8 first (it was brand new) and now I'm back to read them in order.
You're a great story teller. Great imagination, believable plot that moves along nicely, well written, you make the characters likeable.
Gary
wow
im excited for what's next! better be hooot...
wheres the rough ass fuckin =[ GREAT story though. had to rub one out to a pic of my cousin..
U do it again
I read the ch. before this.......my pussy was so wet. Now you get me even wetter! My girlfriend and I licked each other like there is no tomorrow!!! What's goin to happen next!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
too much
this guy is a bit too creepy for my taste - slinking on the floor going into her clothes - he needs to flirt more directly and see what she does
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