Great character development in such a short story, good work. Thanks for your hard work.
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Anonymous01/15/10
Good read
with a little humor. I see there is always one dickhead who can't stand this authors stories, reads it anyway or pretends he read it, just so he can give a low score. Seen it happen over and over. Regardless, you can bet this type of thing happens all over the world. There are always married women ready to get laid. Just a fact of life. Good ending, looks like his roaming days are over. ML
...I'd watch out for Ruby's hubby. Even though he's wheelchair bound he don't cotton to her takin' her love to town.
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Anonymous01/15/10
You know Bob you are so keen to
unload(thoughts come quick and I say that's technically genius)sometimes you don't realise what a great idea you've had til it's trashed. This was a nothing story with a nugget of gold. Should've taken your time on it.
i gotta tellya i do love the humour and pathos that fill your stories to overfilling. your characters are well defined and in the large understandable. BUT i am sooooo not a fan of the wimp husband stories but i also gotta say its worth gettin the sick feelin in ma tummy that that sort of story gives me just to luck into the pearls that i do like.
i understand the stories that i dont like....its just that my personal moral code aint that bendy. once a cheater always one.....and a liar never stops lyin. male or female. thats one of the things i also enjoy about your stories. men cheat to. and actually more opften and your stories cover both sides. good job
I have had one or two (well, two) who tried to fuck me to death. The last one I am still friends with although no more sex. Too bad but a really good friend is hard to find these days.
English
A good fast reading story
To be so lucky! A fun little story, almost believable, but still good to read. I enjoyed the good ending too. Thanks for the post.
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Nice Light Romp
Unless you are worried by all the cuckholds that were generated! Well written.
Well Done
Great character development in such a short story, good work. Thanks for your hard work.
Good read
with a little humor. I see there is always one dickhead who can't stand this authors stories, reads it anyway or pretends he read it, just so he can give a low score. Seen it happen over and over. Regardless, you can bet this type of thing happens all over the world. There are always married women ready to get laid. Just a fact of life. Good ending, looks like his roaming days are over. ML
I don't know Bob....
...I'd watch out for Ruby's hubby. Even though he's wheelchair bound he don't cotton to her takin' her love to town.
You know Bob you are so keen to
unload(thoughts come quick and I say that's technically genius)sometimes you don't realise what a great idea you've had til it's trashed. This was a nothing story with a nugget of gold. Should've taken your time on it.
Keyed up over ending
JPB
Always keyed up for your endings. Good read as always thanks enjoyed it
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zero by Anonymous (not me!)
The guy who rated your story at Zero (00) is obviously 'Nancy's' husband!
not bad
just a nice quick read. a little light on the emotional side or details. but i's perfect for what it is, a simple one-page story.
hey jpb
i gotta tellya i do love the humour and pathos that fill your stories to overfilling. your characters are well defined and in the large understandable. BUT i am sooooo not a fan of the wimp husband stories but i also gotta say its worth gettin the sick feelin in ma tummy that that sort of story gives me just to luck into the pearls that i do like.
i understand the stories that i dont like....its just that my personal moral code aint that bendy. once a cheater always one.....and a liar never stops lyin. male or female. thats one of the things i also enjoy about your stories. men cheat to. and actually more opften and your stories cover both sides. good job
Bob, a good one...
I have had one or two (well, two) who tried to fuck me to death. The last one I am still friends with although no more sex. Too bad but a really good friend is hard to find these days.
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