Alpha Protection Ch. 05

I will be waiting for you to finish

I will await your finale. Dont worry about the haters, you have a great story here. You can find an editor easily. And I followed it just fine, but I always use an editor.

I also understand why the story is taking a while, my Dad died in an accident 3 years ago. Some ppl have no clue!

Keep writing when you can! Great story!

Great story!!!!!! Please hurry.

Finish Please

I think you have a great plot, as said before yes a good editor would help alot, but still its a great story please finish it when your muse strikes ^_^

cant wait for more

really really cool story cant wait for more please start writing more......and dont let negative comments bother you screw the haters

Been a while

When will you continue this story?

pleaseee some more

Anonymous

OMG, will you ever continue this? PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!

~A Very Interested and Aroused reader

Like I'm Gonna Tell You Who I Am!

Okay, seriously, continue this or i find where you live and murder you.

The

Deeper it goes, the better it gets;-)

Anxious

While I'm certainly not going to go to the extremes that the last poster did (very inappropriate)...I really would like it if you would pick up this story again sometimes soon. It's kind of cruel to leave us all out here hanging on the cliffhanger you left us with and then never provide so much as an explanation as to why you've seemingly abandoned this story!

Ouch! 2 years???

I was hoping that there would be a new chapter soon but 2 years without a chapter is more than just a bit painful. :-( too bad. I was hoping to see Val finish what he started.

mshell

Good story! You are a good writer. I hope you finish this story.

cheap bastard here....

....look...this can't be the end....you're just hitting your stride...FUCK! You're good. Yeah...I got invested in the characters...SHIT! Give us SOME type of spinoof!

more!!!

you need to finish it! its such a great story!

come on theres got to be more?

please please continue!

Have to second my co commentors, please please finish the story!!

more

More please! Love it!

yes!

Good stuff! Please more, more, more!

Please come back! This story has some of the best potential on the site!

slow start

it was a slow start alot of unanswered questions .. but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more .. its getting goood real good i love it so far

Amazing!

Plz next chapter its a really good story

more!

Please finish the story!

NOOO

Why is it that I cant find the finished storys

MORE!!!!!!

WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!
Pretty please with a cherry on top.

2 years

It's been two years since you uploaded this chapter. The story is really good so far, but are you going to finish it?

WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Three YEARS and still you haven't wrote more!!!
Is it because you can't figure out what to write? Have you given up on this story? Did you decide to quit writing? Have you forgotten About Literotica? Did you not write more because you thought no one liked your stories?
??? What ever your reason please... PLEASE... keep writing for you are a good writer and this story is fantastic!!!
This story has been viewed 68608 times and has 99 people that favorited this!!!

PLEASE............FINISH THE STORY

When is the next chapter coming? I was disappointed to read of the long time frame without you finishing the story. Whatever is going on in your life, please be considerate to your readers and finish the story. Blessings

I can't wait for the next chapters to come. Please continue this, the story is very good and it would be a waste to not continue this. D: it's been like 2 years already. I hope you continue this and make the uncoming chapters interesting. :) if you're like trying to compile them first before posting that would be nice :) I will look forward to them. :) if ever.

Alpha Protection

Pleaseeeeeeeeee will the other chapters from Ch. 6 appear, can't wait.

ENDING???

Well,i guess we know when the next or final chapter will be posted,,,,NEVER,,its been 3 years and nothing,,,such a waste of the writers and readers time..get them hooked and leave them,So much for all those wonderful emails and how you loved hearing from everyone,,,just join the ranks of the other unfinished wasted stories on here..

Tease

Please write the end

seriously this needs to be finished, how rude not to lol

sigh

I really need to read the comments on the last chapters to ensure that the story has been finished.
It is really frustrating learning about characters, enjoying a story to have it not be finished

Please Finish

4 years later and I'm still waiting :(

More, please?

This story definitely deserves to be completed, won't you please continue it and bring it to a satisfying finish?

update

I love it :)

please please finish

Please finish this story! Its great! I can't wait to see what develops between Val and Cat...

MORE!

My god this story is addictive - I demand more NOW!

Awesome!!!

Hope hope hope you update soon!!

dont leave us hanging

What happen??? Its been months now... are you writting or you leaving thus story unfinished???

Please?

Please continue this story! Pretty please continue this story? Awwww, pleazzzzze?

Your a tease!!

You get the readers hooked on your story then, like so many on here you leave us hanging! It's like we are ready to cum but can't quite get there!

This last chapter was posted in 2010

And yet, you are asking what has happened? That is has been months?
Hah, look at the story writer's bio before getting into anything with chapters. You can tell if it's a finished story or one left hanging in the breeze. This writer has no intention of coming back to finish. It's either been forgotten or real life has gotten in the way.

more please of alpha protection

more please as a female its hot story line

Werewolf Junky

I am totally enjoying this story. I can hardly wait for the next installment. I'm hoping that the brothers successfully mate with the sisters and produce offspring. I know that I'm rushing you, but I hope you are already structuring your next chapter. Waiting hopefully, your werewolf Junky .

Looking forward to the next chapter!