Alpha Protection Ch. 05

Worth the wait

The story has taken an interesting turn. I look forward to the next installment.

MORE!!!

please update as soon as possible!!!

dear god!

please make the time to write a little faster.

the quality of the story is more than good enough to ignore the less than brilliant proof reading.

thanks and look forward to the next instalment.

Great

Can't wait for more.

Great

This is a great read. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Really good

More!

Hurry

Add more soone!!!!!

Good Differences

I read this story a while back, and some of it seems to have changed, now is it me or did you change some of the story. Its great, i was just wondering.

MORE!

What the -? Cut short! LOL Please write more its so good...

More Please!

Loved it!

Finally!!

Please don't make us wait forever and a day again for the next chapter!! Great chapter!

I LOVE IT!

Another great chapter. Such well thought out characters and a story line that grabs you by the collar and holds you! The best!

really nice
hope you can share the next chapter soon

captivating

i hope to read more! i have read all 5 at once and couldn't stop. well written and kept me waiting and wanting....

Worth the wait

I really enjoy this story - keep it up!

Hey i keep getting withdrawals...

Pls do complete this story...a hell lot of time has passed....eagerly waiting !!!!

Great

great story and plot line cant wait till u continue it please =)

omg

please you have to continue this. its is by the far one of the best Were stroies i have read on here for a long time. please contiune it. thanks

Very well

written I look foreward to more!

Love this chapter.

PLEASE do not make us wait any longer for the next though. It was pure torture having to wait so long just for this chapter.

waiting patiently.. trying too..

Love this series I hope you have more to come.. trying to wait patiently for next few more please tell me there are more to come ..

More

More please

Your a Very good writer and story teller

Please tell more. I can hardly wait. Your a great writer and story teller

like the storyline

I love the storyline that you're writing but it needs editing a bit better. You keep going in and out of different tenses, past tense then present tense then sometimes both in one sentence. Stick to past tense because present tense is odd in a story. It's really distracting.
Apart from that, I like it a lot.

entertaining

Can't wait for the next chapter keep wrighting

fantastic!

this story is hot! I do hope that you still plan to continue the story because it deserves to be finished!

please hurry

I love ur story but u take 2 long 2 finsih it please hurry

I Love this Story!

I can't wait for you to write more. I'm anticipating the next addition to the plot with your characters. I love the twists that have been coming up for the two sisters and the Were's as well. Please continue to entertain.

Please continue this series....

This series was well written and made me all hot and bothered. I could feel the attration that Maddox and Val had for Tempest and Cat. That is what a good writer does, makes his readers feel. I look forward to reading more....Excellent keep up the good work. I loved it!!!!!!!

PLEASE WRIGHT MORE!

YOU ARE VERY GOOD YOU SHOULD WRIGHT A BOOK AND GET IT PUBLISHED.

Waiting and waiting...

This is an amazing series and I cannot wait for the next installment. Great stuff!!

Can't wait for more

Can't wait for the rest of the story. I loved the way you used the Goddess! That was great. I like the whole background story for the girls.

I would just say not to rush it so...add a little more detail, esp. around the transitions. It would have been good to put it earlier that Val knew Cat was his mate. That was just thrown in at the end as he left the room...You have an awesome story! Hope we get another chapter soon.

MORE!

I am glad that you posted this chapter--but i do hope that you will be posting a new chapter and soon! i am dying to find out what will happen next, please!!!! :)

I can't wait for the next chapter but I wish you hadn't skipped 2 months in this chapter. I think it seems a little like a cop out because we don't get the building of the M/T relationship and I don't know if I believe that nothing would happen between V/C in those 2 months. I hope you continue and we see a little from C/V then just Val wanting Cat giving in because I think Val already gets that alot from women - I hope Cat makes him treat her well too.

hey!!!

hey! it's been months since you last updated.. i hope that you would continue this story because it's a really great story. hope you're not one of those authors that doesn't finish their works and just leave there stories hanging and reading frustrated and crazy wondering what happens next... PLEASE post soon.. i really like this story

SEQUEL

sequel awaited

great

This is a great story and I can't wait for the part.
Please hurry and poat it.

I need MORE!!!!

Fantastic story again, but ....................... i need more Please!!!

wow

I love this story please continue to write more. I'm really hooked on this story and the characters. I know you have a life outside of writing short stories... but your readers need more.

Keep writing.

more please!!!!

I'm lovin' this story! Please continue ASAP! I would very much like to see what happens next.

*whimpers* more please?

More Please!

More please, this series is amazing and i really want to find out what happens next.

Keep Going! Don't Stop!

More! More! More! You can't stop there....I wanna see what happens with Val and Cat...

Great Story...MORE!

that's just mean stopping there lol. Hope you go further with Cat and Val. Love the development along the way too!

Oh God YES!

MORE MORE MORE.....

Amazing

I had to read all 5 chapters at once, but they will all receive 5 stars from me! Keep on writing this tale. Have more soon.

please continue

Please?

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!

I love this story and am chomping at the bit for the next installments! You have to give us more, you can't leave us hanging like this!

unbelievably good!!

this story is unbelievable... need to no more on whats going to happen with Tempest and Maddox and Val and Cat will they be mated or will the rogue werewolves that hurt Tempest get her and her sister, to use against Maddox. Please hurry up with the next chapters

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more more more please

great story ... need more soon as possible