All Comments on 'Swedish Delight'

by ThePoisonedThorn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good start.

I loved the first part & I can't wait to read the next.

rbennerbenneover 14 years ago
A Great Start

I love good taboo and yours is an excellent start. Can't wait for the rest

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Never enough twin stories

There is never enough of identical female twin stories. This story was a very good start but was way too short. There needed to be way more description about what it was like for each twin to see an identical pussy from two inches away. To enjoy the warm rich scent so close and to describe the wet tender lips and the way her vagina felt around her tongue. I'm sure if two identical twin sisters had sex together they would do impossibly naughty things to each other. Good read. Keep writing. Ultimately take more time and flesh out your story more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
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thats not swedish names

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

You say Swedish but all your names are Finnish.

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