I would love to see more story with these two characters...although it is also a great standalone!!
Cute, good read. Thank you.
Much love to a Trini sista! Keep writin an representin
I love all of your writing so far- pls do continue!!! Elle xx
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Loved it
I would love to see more story with these two characters...although it is also a great standalone!!
Nicely done!!
Cute, good read. Thank you.
Dat good
Much love to a Trini sista! Keep writin an representin
I loved it...
I love all of your writing so far- pls do continue!!!
Elle xx
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