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My Older Neighbor Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/17/10

hot

Hotter Than a four balled Tomcat. It was like you were recalling my past when you described her as pleading that the man had made her ultra sensitive after she had just had an orgasm.I used to fuck a black married woman. She would crawl all over the bed to keep me from touching her clit for awhile.

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by Anonymous01/17/10

Very Good

Both stories are very good, sensitive, and hot. My only gripe is that a woman of that age would not be comfortable using the word "fuck." Her generation just did not talk that way. So, even though the text would work for 30 and 40 somethings, you do need to consider whether your characters would be acting in character to speak the words you give them.

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by Anonymous01/17/10

Well let's see. 'Fuck' being one

of the oldest words in the English Language.

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by Anonymous01/18/10

wow

that gave me a hard one so bad!

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by Anonymous08/14/10

Life, Love and happiness

I am older male 61 to be exact, A wonderful story, I have been alone for over a year now and for all practicality was virtually for the last 10--15 years before that while my wife was still alive (her choice) of a 33 year marriage.

I wish...Aw hell you know what I wish.
As me pappy said if wishes were horses we wold be up to our armpits in horseshit.

Keep writing please
Butch auhunter04@yahoo.com

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by buttcheeks77709/08/12

Chapter 3 please!

OHHHHHH! You HAVE to add more chapters to this relationship! Come on! Don't leave me hanging (literally; my cock is hanging out waiting for more, more, MORE!)
I want to read about him plunging into her tight, pink, luscious asshole between those big, beautiful butt cheeks, and even more. Great stories!

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by Anonymous01/08/14

Aarrrggghhhh; no more 1 pagers

They almost sound like newlyweds!!

More, more, more

DKP

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