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Well written and nice story.
But also sad and of course this happening right now in the UK and the US. Thanks for the story.
Really nicely written - will read more
Thank you for a delicately, romantically written piece. I enjoyed it a lot, although it is very different from what I normally read here! It is a sad story, and I hope not too autobiographical. It does represent the reality of life for many families and couples on both sides of the Atlantic. Thank you.
well written
that was so sad! the tone of it throughout was as though there was a tragedy waiting to happen but that didnt lessen the blow! thanks, and good luck
Touching
Beautifully touching and wonderfully written. Sad, but so true... thank you.
maybe if enough men(boys,really)...
...die, women can end this bullshit. Well done.
Sad...
yet beautifully poignant.
Well done!
Excellent sense of tempo and build. I enjoyed this greatly.
Wonderful
Yes, war did what the age difference couldn't, but they did get their time together, which is more than most in their situation wouldn't have, due to social pressure.
Excellent story.
beautiful
tht was great. i actually cried at the end it might partially be because im pretty tired but u totally got me i wasnt at all expecting that and was like a watched a really romantic drama.
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