Riley's Bar Ch. 01

Great Start

No wimp here! Of course there is still space for humans to be humans! I would have thought that the other guy would all ready have assumed responsibility for her... Maybe they have hung their future on him working for them. I do find it strange that everything was done without him getting a hearing relative a divorce..

What a loser.

Seriously, how many times does he need to be divorced? Twice? three times? Who is this fucktard, the Elizabeth Taylor of idiots? JPB, not one of your better ones.

Wow!

Elaine is one crazy or stupid woman if she think she'll win that one! Besides JPB, you forgot that they wrote everything down on notepads to compare, so that's legal in most states! Great story!!

Good fun story

I'm not normally a fan, but I liked this one.

yes!

finally, i jpb story that wasnt retarded! im so glad this guy actually acts like he has a set. haha, fuck the stupid ass ex wife of his and her cult. this is awesome because i knew someone that had something similar happen. although, he didnt spend over 100 days in jail and there were other legal problems. still, this was a great story and im glad it didnt have any of the cliche-coming home early/ beat up other man or woman/ it was just sex, im sorry, can we still be together? bullshit i see all the time on this site. keep it up!

Lost me when after detailing a divorce

nine months previous then went on to talk about him being a comfirmed bachelor. How would that work then?

Will JPB actually finish a multi-part story?

Good so far, will the man stick to his guns? Lets see.

nice start

but I sure hope they don't get back together. I certainly hope the husband will eventually come out on time and Elaine will wish she never found a mind altering religion.

re: Will JPB actually finish a multi-part story

Yeah. It's been at Stories online for several months, totaling about 8 chapters -- maybe 9.

the best

I've read most of your stories. Some I've liked and some I haven't liked, and there were a couple that I absolutly despised. This was without a doubt the best story you have written to date!!! Please continue this and PLEASE don't turn this man into anything other than what he is.He's got his principles, and he's got the balls to back them up.Great job JPB. thank you.

folks get a fooking Brain

If any one thinks Elaine is gone then you are probably an idiot.

So so

"Religion is the opiate of the masses" - Karl Marx

Very entertaining read!

Thanks for the entertainment! It will be interesting to see where this goes!
Thanks for writing!
sexmate

Great story line

Very entertaining and well done! PLEASE continue soon. I just hope the continuation is up to par with the start. There are all kind of seed and hints that could let the story go several different directions.

5*****s! I love it.

This is one of the best stories I have read. As least Ch. 01 is. I will reserve the next chapter after I read it.

Excellent

This is a great tale. A man that stands his ground against a strange wife and the court system has a lot of balls. But what is actually on the now ex-wife's mind? I guess I'll find out...

Thanks for the offering.

Well Done

Such a good and truthful story.
So pleased to see the true facts of Jehovah's Witnesses.

Well at least he stuck it to Elaine

Not sure that he shouldn't have gotten an attorney himself, but I like it!

6*

Oh yes! This man is my hero. I hope he burns down the meeting hall.

Abandon all hope, all ye who enter!