Wow, your poem moved me, excited to read more of your work....
so dead on cool !
Your an awsome writer I like all of your poems.
great poem. i really liked it.
Your poems sound real. this one is conversational and has an intimate quality that comes less from the subject, imo, and more from its honesty.
See? I said I'd read it and I did! :)
That was very deep! Loved it
This rendering comes accross as a warm intimate description of a man's tender affections. Lovely.
and so romantic. Thanks.
triffik feel just like this when im with this lady
I was really impressed with this poem..I've been reading the new submissions none had the emotion and sincerity that yours did..kudos..me likey ;)
This poem sums up how I feel about a certain young lady in Australia. We were to meet this weekend, December 13th, but alas our plans were dashed. Now we'll have to wait two years.
How real and sweet this is.....I have felt some of these very same feelings before..... :)
This certainly delineates that feeling of being in love, of loving competely and so well. It's wonderful and scary and delightful! I love it!
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