All Comments on 'My Lost Date'

I enjoyed your story, although I do not think it was in the correct category. It should really have been in the "Group Sex" section.

The story would have been much better and had a smoother flow if it had been edited more. There were too many glaringly obvious grammatical errors for me to really get into the story good. Good premise, but need more editing and detail in the story to make it come alive. And I agree with the other poster, this should have been in group sex. Keep trying!

Thanks for the comments so far! this is my first published story in years, and my very first of this kind. please keep commenting.

your well on your way to having some mad skills! i enjoyed your story and look forward to your next installment.