Nice story. Like the build up and it has a good believable plotline. Would love to read next chapter.
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Anonymous01/26/10
great story!
more more more!! keep the story progressing!
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Anonymous01/26/10
Very Good
Very good story. This one deserves another chapter or two.
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Anonymous01/26/10
Great Stories!!
After reading the Towel yesterday and the Bikini today I went back and read all your stories. You've done a really great job!! Hope to see more really soon!
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Anonymous01/26/10
Why
Would a sane stright man want this? In real life he wouldn't.
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Anonymous01/26/10
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Anonymous01/26/10
Loved The Towel. This was a little
disappointing, too vanilla and nudge nudge. But I see a lot of people enjoyed it a lot so I'm going to up my score by 25. Maybe I'm the one misreading...Mancelt.
Two half-naked girls, two guys with their cocks teasing the entrance to forbidden pleasure -- you are planning another chapter, right? Even if the guys simply swap the ladies back around and fuck their own partners till the sun sets.
Writing is still good, but the characters from the towel story have changed too radically for belief. And what happened? The story just halts when it is getting going...
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Please continue
Nice story. Like the build up and it has a good believable plotline. Would love to read next chapter.
great story!
more more more!! keep the story progressing!
Very Good
Very good story. This one deserves another chapter or two.
Great Stories!!
After reading the Towel yesterday and the Bikini today I went back and read all your stories. You've done a really great job!! Hope to see more really soon!
Why
Would a sane stright man want this? In real life he wouldn't.
.
.
Loved The Towel. This was a little
disappointing, too vanilla and nudge nudge. But I see a lot of people enjoyed it a lot so I'm going to up my score by 25. Maybe I'm the one misreading...Mancelt.
No place to stop
Two half-naked girls, two guys with their cocks teasing the entrance to forbidden pleasure -- you are planning another chapter, right? Even if the guys simply swap the ladies back around and fuck their own partners till the sun sets.
Love it!!!!
Nay-sayers be damned!
Half done and radical character change
Writing is still good, but the characters from the towel story have changed too radically for belief. And what happened? The story just halts when it is getting going...
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