All Comments on 'The Bikini'

Nice story. Like the build up and it has a good believable plotline. Would love to read next chapter.

more more more!! keep the story progressing!

Very good story. This one deserves another chapter or two.

After reading the Towel yesterday and the Bikini today I went back and read all your stories. You've done a really great job!! Hope to see more really soon!

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disappointing, too vanilla and nudge nudge. But I see a lot of people enjoyed it a lot so I'm going to up my score by 25. Maybe I'm the one misreading...Mancelt.

Two half-naked girls, two guys with their cocks teasing the entrance to forbidden pleasure -- you are planning another chapter, right? Even if the guys simply swap the ladies back around and fuck their own partners till the sun sets.

Nay-sayers be damned!

Writing is still good, but the characters from the towel story have changed too radically for belief. And what happened? The story just halts when it is getting going...

Poorly written

you were just getting to the good part

but didn't finish and hasn't been back in 8 years, such a pity.