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by Anonymous01/23/10

But the start of a new Journey?

Quite a story! It's been years since you last wrote. I hope this is the start of a new creative era.

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by Anonymous01/24/10

A leaky eye story

I loved the story but it was difficult to read at the end because of all my tears.

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by Pandora3310301/25/10

Note from Author

I appreciate the comments. Yes, I have been going though a spell where all my creativity was tied up with my kids, but I have been missing my writing. Hopefully now I can get back to it and finish all the stories that are in notebooks all around my house. Keep leaving me the messages and if you have any ideas, please let me know. Thank you again! :)

I will be submitting Chaper 2 pretty soon. Hope you like it.

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