All Comments on 'Riley's Bar Ch. 03'

Oh, it is a good story, but what does it have to do with Elaine chasing her tail looking for him or him trying to find Karen and get that straightened out? If this is supposed to be the same guy using Riley's Bar, as I thought it was, then his story should continue. However, it now looks as though this is more a compendium of stories featuring various customers at the bar. Except that I didn't see anything relating to Riley's Bar in Vegas. Hmmm.

Keep it going and let's all see where it ends up.

Clearly a screw up — the Riley's Bar story has been published before, and this isn't part of it. JPB has no doubt inadvertently put up the wrong text...

Is this the same story as part one and two?

Is this the same story as part one and two?

This chapter does not match up to previous ones. It would appear you posted the wrong thing

wow i am in left field on this one

Just checking to see if anyone is paying attention???

you leave chptr 2 with Karen not returning calls. You are estranged from Elaine, then you mention your diet your wife has put you on!!!!!!!!

What went wrong with the plot?????

it's bad ebough you don't post a complete story all at once then you do this crap. The bad thing is you're just reposting old stories so why no post it all at once........

I'm not sure how this story relates to the previous two. I'm lost. What the heck Bob normally your so well in tune with the readers but I think you clicked the wrong file this time.

This is apparently the beginning story. Chapter 2 was different from this one.

This is not part of the Riley's Bar set. How it got my name and the title of my story on it I have no idea. It isn't even a story that I wrote. I've notified Lit about this and hopefully they will get it straightened out soon.

JPB

it would be nice, now that lit has posted the right chapter, to remove the comments that were attached to the wrong one, wouldn't it???

As it wasn't Bob's shitty writing.

for those who demand objective stories. For me it is fine!

Some people will evaluate base on the past chapter and others on chapters still to be posted, but if you go one by one this was excellent.

Bob, what the hell are you doing--I think you are smoking sone good dope and your brain is off-key---what the hell is the story.

Still curious!

On to the next chapter.

Thanks for writing

sexmate

Another 5***** chapter.

What a screwed up life. Thanks for the offering.

Money orders are easily traceable with a subpoena. Right back to the location they were purchased from. Should have had Granny deposit the money order and then have a new one issued in Florida.

so they venture off into the dating scene again. TK U MLJ LV NV