All Comments on 'My Slutty Mother Ch. 02'

...about his scumbag of a neighbor, take a baseball bat to his car as a warning?

I like the way the story ended. It has an opening to allow the author to continue with this slutty mom or let it end. Well done.

too ho hum. give me a break and read some of the other stories and put some spice in the content.

story line. A son and his mother. Maybe he can knock her up so he can have a retard as a sibling like the people that like this kind of stuff.

if i was in jakes shoes,id tell her she even thinks about fucking dunn or anyone else, except dad and me. she would regret it far more than she did now in the coldest most disturbing voice i could muster. then not go into detail let her imagination run wild, hundreds of possiblities. if dunn kept coming around, id write him a note that if he doesnt leave town.(from jake's perspective, that way its like its a third party with nothing to lose. its just somebody having some fun with some sensitive information.) id tell jake and his dad of the little affair and that im sure they would be more than happy to remove his ass from this earth along with shirley. after of course telling his wife and children of his little betrayal.

The stories r great but u need to add more details so the reader can get sucked into the story and actually imagine what's happening. Other than that it's an amazing piece hope ur next story will have more details of what's happening to the mother and what jake is making her do.

Just wish mommy sucked her boy! *****