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Capramendes, the Milkmaid

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by sadlittlelostboy01/25/10

Betrayal and Tits make a delicious combination

On of my very favourite stories is your "The biggest tits in the world." To this you have added a big fat dose of betrayal, and it's a delicious combination.

Thanks again, MEH!

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by Anonymous02/02/10

I want to see more like is story

the story was sexy. will you make one that a sexy school teacher demoness . that would be hot. Just a idea. I also like blond hair women is your stories. I would like to see more with crushed between her breasts too of thoses two women they wear hot too. Your wirting hard to put down. Good sexy story.

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by NotShyGuy02/05/10

Just wanted to say

It's always great to read your work. Hope to see more from you soon and I'm glad to hear that 201 is on the way.

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by Anonymous02/10/10

love it

Excellenct but more titfucking! And another girl to help is allways good!

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by Anonymous03/23/10

Super!

Very erotic! What about a story where a best friend turns out to be succubus...

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by The_Equillibria05/07/10

Good indeed

very erotic but still needs something more.

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by Cranfree06/25/10

Wonderful story, if only...

Loved this story, nice topic and ideas.

If only he didn't have to die, though. Would have much preferred him getting lucking and turning into an incubus, or something along those lines. Maybe her personal incubus, even.

But still, amazing writing, keep it up, I still loved it.

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by Anonymous07/31/10

Mmmm, milk

I read this again, and think it is becoming one of my favorites from this H-space series. I liked the lead-up to the final, hideously erotic climax, especially the succubi flying around with goat hooves, for some reason. I'm not sure if it's because you're main character was going to die anyway, but it was a little hard to tell him apart from any of the other soldiers who meet a nasty end at the hands - or vaginas, as the case may be - of cruel but nonetheless smokin' succubi. Of course, your stories here are erotica first and foremost, but it might round out your stories to emphasize the individuality of the main character; although, I suppose if he's going ultimately pop his clogs it doesn't matter much either way. Keep writing, it is very much enjoyed and appreciated.

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by wet_special08/29/10

I've been reading your work ever since I encountered this story. The Summoning Series is a must, and I was sad when I reached the end, glad that there's still more out there to read about from Rosa and Verde. Keep writing!

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by Acal11/12/10

Ending

I do agree with Cranfree, that would have been a nice touch rather then the standard 'death' ending. But other then that it was hot!

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by Anonymous12/04/10

Minus 1 Star for the "Standard Death Ending."

Yup. You read it right. I love your writing, but it's getting really tired/cliched; regardless of the story, you always write a "death" ending. It's getting stale and rather one note, which is unfortunate as you happen to be a very fine writer (and I love Succubi), but your stories all end roughly the same way.

It's beginning to feel like "read one, read'em all" right now, as regardless of how they start, they all end with a death ending.

Minus 1 Star.

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by Anonymous12/10/10

Nice story!

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by xxxecil02/06/11

Much More...

I would have given far more than name, rank, and serial number! Yikes! Very enjoyable read. But you might consider a story where lots of other people die, but one man becomes a sex slave to the demons, imprisoned by his own lust.

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by xxxecil04/25/11

we can only hope

If Earth suffers this sort of invasion, I wouldn't last five minutes.

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by Anonymous05/31/11

Well Done

A very good read. Awesome ending. I did not see that one coming.

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by Anonymous07/27/11

That is a freaking awesome story!

Out of all the stories that I've read so far this is my absolute favorite! Having your penis stuck in a pulsing breast. That is just such a turn on in so many different ways and levels. Sadly again, your character died. I know that this is a point of many of your stories, but it just makes the stories seems so depressing. Can you write a different story similar to this where they actually “milk the guys penis”, and keep them alive to keep milking him over and over again? Overall, this was a great story!

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by Anonymous07/27/11

great story!

I love the death endings! The story feels too soft if there isn't death involved! muhahaha!

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by Hurbster12/23/11

Another good guy dead.

Nasty, shame really as this guy was actually a good bloke.

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by Anonymous05/17/12

Strangely humorous

I thought it was pretty funny, getting milked by a breast lol. Felt sorry for the guy at the end though :o

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by Anonymous11/23/12

I in general prefer happy endings as life gives us enough crap; however, this story was better off with the dark ending.

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by lakutettiga07/01/13

saw this in 9erotica lmao you rock

fucking awesome

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by Ternom03/12/14

Loved how he had some hope to the very last moment before everything was taken from him, hehe :)

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by DrSpidey03/27/15

One of my favorites.

I hate the fact he dies. I was rooting for him the first time I read it.
Still a great story, and I like the fact Capramendes had gigantic breasts. That was a turn on.

I love your other stories as well. Please keep writing.

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