All Comments on 'Carbon Dating'

too short for me. I've liked your others and this one has a great start, but honestly, it just seems lacking something, even for a chapter in a coninued story. I just grasp about 3/4 of a story here. Could be me, young lady, that in my aged senility I've missed something, but I went over it twice. I like your western themes, too, as an old agrulla owner and rider.

The title on this story should be "Bowman's Trade". I submitted 2 different stories and only one was posted but having the title of the other. I have asked that it be changed or taken down or whatever but haven't received any reply so far. Knowing the correct title before you read the story might actually help you understand the story a bit more. "Carbon Dating" is an entirely different story. Sorry for the mixup.

Not only was there no “definitive ending” (a quote from the author’s bio), as near as I could tell, there was no definitive story. Oh well, onward and upward.

Not sure what I just read, but I liked it. Lots of things were left for us to figure out by ourselves, but the ending was just too abrupt. Wish it could have continued.