The erroneous apostrophe in the title should have been sufficient warning, but I was forgiving enough to start reading the story. I soon regretted my generosity. There may be one well written sentence in the story, but if so it occurs after the point at which I gave up.
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Anonymous01/25/10
Develop writing skills
You have the skeleton of a reasonable story but seem to lack the writing skills to express it. Try submitting the story to one of Literotica’s editors and then perhaps under a different title resubmit it. Writing skills can be developed.
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Anonymous01/26/10
What what?
For all the losers here complaining about the writing I find it incredulous that you are criticizing the writing style of this story. You idiots never graduated from high school so you guys have no right to talk and yet...you do....typical under 25 year old losers! Go jump off a bridge you lazy bums!
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Anonymous01/28/10
I'm under 25
However, I enjoyed the story. A little too short, but enjoyed it nonetheless. :)
English
??
Learn to speak English.
editors are your friend
get thee one.
Badly written
The erroneous apostrophe in the title should have been sufficient warning, but I was forgiving enough to start reading the story. I soon regretted my generosity. There may be one well written sentence in the story, but if so it occurs after the point at which I gave up.
Develop writing skills
You have the skeleton of a reasonable story but seem to lack the writing skills to express it. Try submitting the story to one of Literotica’s editors and then perhaps under a different title resubmit it. Writing skills can be developed.
What what?
For all the losers here complaining about the writing I find it incredulous that you are criticizing the writing style of this story. You idiots never graduated from high school so you guys have no right to talk and yet...you do....typical under 25 year old losers! Go jump off a bridge you lazy bums!
I'm under 25
However, I enjoyed the story. A little too short, but enjoyed it nonetheless. :)
Good Party
The needs of 2 people were catered for. A loving grandson with his grandmother.
Needless to say the relationship will mature.
Your writing is so poor
you can't even get the title right.
Um, and I know you're ignorant, so let me explain.
Gets requires no apostrophe.
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