All Comments on 'Grandma Get's Love'

by spunkybubble

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
??

Learn to speak English.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
editors are your friend

get thee one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Badly written

The erroneous apostrophe in the title should have been sufficient warning, but I was forgiving enough to start reading the story. I soon regretted my generosity. There may be one well written sentence in the story, but if so it occurs after the point at which I gave up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Develop writing skills

You have the skeleton of a reasonable story but seem to lack the writing skills to express it. Try submitting the story to one of Literotica’s editors and then perhaps under a different title resubmit it. Writing skills can be developed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
What what?

For all the losers here complaining about the writing I find it incredulous that you are criticizing the writing style of this story. You idiots never graduated from high school so you guys have no right to talk and yet...you do....typical under 25 year old losers! Go jump off a bridge you lazy bums!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I'm under 25

However, I enjoyed the story. A little too short, but enjoyed it nonetheless. :)

Sapper257Sapper257over 8 years ago
Good Party

The needs of 2 people were catered for. A loving grandson with his grandmother.

Needless to say the relationship will mature.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Your writing is so poor

you can't even get the title right.

Um, and I know you're ignorant, so let me explain.

Gets requires no apostrophe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Minu vanaema

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Such a besutiful story !

I love the totally believable premise and dialogue. Very tender, loving and sensual. Truly erotic ! Love that she is 73 years old. Women becpme amazing after 65. I have been with hundreds of ladies but the best sex ever has been with hot grandmas aged 68 -75 . So attentive, well lingeried and erotically seductive. Good for grandmas everywhere ....😘💕

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please Granny lovers don’t want stories about elder women who look like they’re in their thirties They love grannies because they think grannies are beautiful Full figures, big floppy tits, big bellies that hang over their mound like an apron, big round asses and full legs and thighs Gray silver or white hair. If I want a woman in her thirties I’ll chase her If I want a granny and I do I want a granny who looks feels and acts like one

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