by spunkybubble
The erroneous apostrophe in the title should have been sufficient warning, but I was forgiving enough to start reading the story. I soon regretted my generosity. There may be one well written sentence in the story, but if so it occurs after the point at which I gave up.
You have the skeleton of a reasonable story but seem to lack the writing skills to express it. Try submitting the story to one of Literotica’s editors and then perhaps under a different title resubmit it. Writing skills can be developed.
For all the losers here complaining about the writing I find it incredulous that you are criticizing the writing style of this story. You idiots never graduated from high school so you guys have no right to talk and yet...you do....typical under 25 year old losers! Go jump off a bridge you lazy bums!
However, I enjoyed the story. A little too short, but enjoyed it nonetheless. :)
The needs of 2 people were catered for. A loving grandson with his grandmother.
Needless to say the relationship will mature.
you can't even get the title right.
Um, and I know you're ignorant, so let me explain.
Gets requires no apostrophe.
Tulin sõjaväest koju ja läksin siis vanaema vaatama Vanaema on kõva alkoholi sõber ning õhtul võtsime kenasti viina ja olime purjus.Mina kui sõjaväest tulnud ning polnud kaua naist saanud siis mõtlesin vanaema peale.Embasin siis vanaema ja proovisin talle kätt saba alla ajada mis ei õnnestunud.Teisel katsel sain juba käe püksi ajada ja ta jäi kohkunult mulle otsa vaatama.Hõõrusin siis teda tükk aega jalge vahelt ning hakkasin tal pükse maha tõmbama kui järsku kuulsime õues jutu hääli.Postimees tuli lehte tellima nii jäi minu tegu vanaemaga tegemata.
I love the totally believable premise and dialogue. Very tender, loving and sensual. Truly erotic ! Love that she is 73 years old. Women becpme amazing after 65. I have been with hundreds of ladies but the best sex ever has been with hot grandmas aged 68 -75 . So attentive, well lingeried and erotically seductive. Good for grandmas everywhere ....😘💕
Please Granny lovers don’t want stories about elder women who look like they’re in their thirties They love grannies because they think grannies are beautiful Full figures, big floppy tits, big bellies that hang over their mound like an apron, big round asses and full legs and thighs Gray silver or white hair. If I want a woman in her thirties I’ll chase her If I want a granny and I do I want a granny who looks feels and acts like one