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Fucking on a grey January day

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by Anonymous

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Enjoyable

Take on this event

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by jthserra01/24/10

Now this is erotica

excellent work, I could feel this one, taste it.

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by theognis01/23/11

*****

Five.

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by SlapNTickle4Me06/30/11

The title?

I loved the poem, I felt the summer, the lust, the beginning and ending of the tryst.

The title of the poem however doesn't seem appropriate. Can you please explain your choice of title?

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