All Comments on 'Fucking on a grey January day'

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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 14 years ago
Enjoyable

Take on this event

jthserrajthserraabout 14 years ago
Now this is erotica

excellent work, I could feel this one, taste it.

SlapNTickle4MeSlapNTickle4Meover 12 years ago
The title?

I loved the poem, I felt the summer, the lust, the beginning and ending of the tryst.

The title of the poem however doesn't seem appropriate. Can you please explain your choice of title?

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I'm green. Like a lush forest. I love hiking, biking, rain, interesting religious ideas, big trees, books, art, design, poetry, spicy food, liberal politics, quirky movies. And sex. I like that, too. Hobbies: Helping babygirl learn important things.