Sad but only too true to life. Love ones leave us to live our lives with out the ones that we hold so close to us. As with most of us, I've been there and had those feelings of being left, but life goes on. Thanks for the very good story, and the remembrance you have given me of my past feelings.
You've proven that statement true with this piece. The words seemed to flow effortlessly and the sex was damn near scorching. Your talent speaks for itself.
The story was well written and very emotional. I would rather not have read it all the same. No offense meant to your fine writing skill, but I'm here looking to recover from a loss, not be reminded of how bad its been hurting.
No way for an author to know that, of course, but a disclaimer at the outset would help those of us who may not be in an emotional state to endure such sadness. In lieu of that, an "Add author to ignore list" button might help.
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wow
wow! thanks for sharing this.
Unexpectedly Good
enjoyable read with,for me,a thought provoking end. Thanks
OldWayne
It was a very poignant and beautiful little tale. Thanks so much for submitting it.
Very well done
This is the only story I have thought enough of to leave a comment. Quite a refreshing change from the norm of mother-son tales.
Well done ,beautifully written
Sad but only too true to life. Love ones leave us to live our lives with out the ones that we hold so close to us. As with most of us, I've been there and had those feelings of being left, but life goes on. Thanks for the very good story, and the remembrance you have given me of my past feelings.
The best writing comes from the heart!
You've proven that statement true with this piece. The words seemed to flow effortlessly and the sex was damn near scorching. Your talent speaks for itself.
Soft
Very sweet and arousing.
Excellent
One of he best "Sex Stories" I have ever read. VERY GOOD
This site needs an iggy bin
The story was well written and very emotional. I would rather not have read it all the same. No offense meant to your fine writing skill, but I'm here looking to recover from a loss, not be reminded of how bad its been hurting.
No way for an author to know that, of course, but a disclaimer at the outset would help those of us who may not be in an emotional state to endure such sadness. In lieu of that, an "Add author to ignore list" button might help.
Nice !
I felt it... Very warm... Thank you.
This was the best story Ive read in along time.
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