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by AzPilot01/27/10

Very good, young lady. Your word pictures--

were not only clear, they were vivid. I, personally, am a fan of "what if" type of endings and to me, yours fit that catagory very well. It showed a lot of thought and planning. In words of few syllables, I enjoyed it and thank you.

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by rombo03408/05/14

Très, très fantastique!
It builds a great anticipation, that is met in a rather unpredictable way.
Well done!

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