All Comments on 'A Perfect Nude Family'

Pretty hot story. A bit unrealistic, but that's what a fantasy is. Watch your spelling and grammar, and you'll be all right.

Not bad for the first. They can only get better!

Writing something more beleivable would be a better story to write on the next go around!

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

Real people don't talk like what was written in the story. I think it was distracting from the real core of the story. I do think that the storyline is good and would like to read more on this family. I would like to see the boy fuck his mother and sister at the same time.Thanks

I'm afraid that I would be wasting my time. You would not know what I was talking about if I pointed out your errors.

Tung Is A Tree Native To China. I Imagine You Intended To Say Tongue!!! Aside From That Good First Try.

Too poorly written to enjoy - the problems are too numerous to list.

Screw the comments about the bad grammar that will improve as you write more. I love the story line and would love to see continue, I am sure he has a date and a good time with his mother. I love this line, please ignore the the idiots distracted by a few mistakes, keep learning and keep up the good work. Jenni

I come on this site and read these hot stories for my own pleasure. I do NOT come here for spelling or grammer lessons. In fact some of the errors make the story a little more appealing as it gives the writer a feeling of being real which makes a hot story even hotter

this story needs to continue... asap. tons of potential. don't let the grammar police keep you down. keep writing. i want more.

plz keep this story going i think its great stuff

made my pussy so wet i had to fuck myself, more please.

I hope there is more.

that was a fun read,,,would have liked more from this family,,,and it was nice that you didn't have to add a lot of vulgar language to make it a hot story,,,it was a good sexy story,,,maybe you will add a chapter or two,,,i will be looking forward to it!

As I said on title it was one of the best a have red, and I red a lot

Wish I was part of the family. Awesome story and don't stop. Go get it.

Great but too short. More chapters please!

When's part 2 coming?

That was a great story but short as it was I hope there is more

Keep writing. The nude family is a great concept.

Yes, I believe all families should have an opportunity to enjoy, share and experience each others naked bodies. the naked body is an awesome creation and its a blessing to give that creation to your family.

I wanna see pics! Seeing the family get their groove on with each other makes me horny!!!!!! Ok, I'll cum on everyone!!!!!!!

Please write more.......

Pretty darned good for your first time. Keep up the good work.

Loved the free wheeling, open sex within the family. Look forward to more. Perhaps an offspring with a parent?

Of course, a loving nude family gets real close. Take the young son of the family. He sees what he's secretly been itching to see for years. His sister's sweet little slit and, best of all, that mysterious hairy hole between his mother's thighs, the same hole of came out of. The kid springs the biggest hard of his life, he's on the verge of blowing his balls and shooting a stream of semen across the fucking room. Now, a truly loving mom will take pity on her baby boy, by taking his fat young cock in into that wonderful hole her kid came into the world from, her warm wet out of this world gorgeous ever-loving motherly cunt. How many guys do you think would love to have a mom like that? I know I sure as fuck would. Nothing can ever feel as good, as loving, just so damn right to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt.

Avery sexy story moving and touching. There was however a need for proof reading and editing but not so much as to interfere with the flow of the story. Keep writing you got talent.

Hi my name is Bill, and I want to share in your families loving relationship. Myself and my daughter live together and I brought her up the same way your parents brought you and your sister up . Except I never got to make love to my sister's, although when my sister was the ripe age of twelve she entered my room with such a glow that I immediately thought wow she's beautiful, blonde hair, hazel colored eyes and skinny and firm unlike my younger sister who matured faster than me but could never see her the way I see my older sister. She came to my bed dropped her nighty and began unleashing her hormones on her ten year old brother, and I have to tell you it was the best loving feeling I had ever felt. She began kissing me and rubbing her c cup amazing tits and gently touching her beautiful cookie. In watching her do this being only a boy I felt my four incher between my legs start throbbing. My Sister seen this and she even got more horny , she immediately positioned herself to start riding my face and at first I was scared but once I felt her warm wet pussy all over my lips and face that fear turned to excitement and I just had to extend my tongue and taste my sister's first orgasm . It was the only time in my life so far that I truly felt loved and wanted. Because I was ten years old I didn't spray her back with my inner wetness but I could tell as she rubbed my penis that at that .Moment we would be closer than ever..My sister moved because of my big

Dicked step father who owned a bar and was a woman and child beater. And unfortunately didn't see much of her after that but I will never forget how good I felt because of her doing that beautiful sexual act to me before she left. I tried with my younger sister but cuz she was over weight she was confused about her own beauty. But still to this day I'm still running around nude and can't wait for something that beautiful to happen again!!. But since it's just my daughter and I we love and are nude as much as possible just like my two son's and recently separated woman are in their home and I do believe they love and cherish each other .more than all the people in this crazy world. And it's cuz we loved and we're closer than any family that has the clothing restrictions.

Go back to school, little boy.

Gotta start somewhere. Good first story, reread before publishing to catch typos and run on sentences. Spend time developing to ensure a good finished story. Not too bad for a first story.

My step sister brought the story to me nude and we read it together and masterbated each other and she ate my cum

My niece and I read this while soaking in our hot tub

We were both nude and had been exploring each other before reading this story. We fucked like rabbits after reading this.

I don't care about the spelling or the grammar. I was hard from the start and if I had not taken care of myself 30 minutes before reading the story, I would be doing that now. How about the kids joining the parents time and include some son-dad action.

I loved it. Joh

I love stories like these. Would love mother daughter and father son fuckng action

This family story had the right elements that I like. e.g. lots of nudity, family caring for each other, smooth shaved genitals, and lots of erctions. Good job! Keep up the good stories.

the key is the constant nudist family. the sex will follow. push the sex early and often between all.